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After the dragons fly
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After the dragons fly |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
After the dragons fly, after their fire ballet across the sky, what’s left? Cold cinders. Damp ash. Two people. and a memory of heat Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Nan~ Oh my ... this is GOOD ! You accomplish so much with your talent~ I adore the all of this~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
I'd ask the same of lightning.. what's left after it is gone.. but the memory of the beauty of the flash...and the knowing there could be more... |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
oh, what an image! |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
Marge, thanks girl! It came to me last night while I was trying to sleep, and I wrote it down just like it came. Cpat-yes! Lightning is just like that, isn't it? Midnitesun-thank you, girl. I saw it in my mind while I was trying to go to sleep last night, and I had to write it. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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Copperbell Senior Member
since 2003-11-08
Posts 956 |
much enjoyed  |
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choshi Senior Member
since 2004-01-01
Posts 1184New York |
I really enjoyed this ballet of imagery you paint in this amazing sky ~P |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
The first two lines make you feel like your kinda flying and the rest kinda drops you but more to give you a foundation to lift off from than steal the good light feeling, -GIS No turning back, this time, no walking away -Kutless |
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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
Sorry O just wanted to add it. Thanx No turning back, this time, no walking away -Kutless |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
thought provoking and very well done Enjoyed |
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Soleil Noir Senior Member
since 2001-12-19
Posts 688USA |
A sad poem, Nan. But, a reflective one. |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
Thanks so much, everyone, I'm so grateful for your attention to this one. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
excellent!!!! |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Loved it, Nan! |
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msflame Member
since 2002-05-21
Posts 188 |
Escellent metaphor. (where are the similies everyone is using ?) |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
This is great work!!! |
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barbaraj Member
since 2003-01-24
Posts 139Nova Scotia, Canada |
 great poemI hope that when the world comes to an end, I can breathe a sigh of relief, because there will be so much to look forward to... |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
I came in today after losing in Vegas, and found my jackpot here! Thanks, everyone. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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Zinsser Senior Member
since 2001-02-27
Posts 1641Calif. |
I like this very much |
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