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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Temples I built a temple made of groan Cemented with a mortars moan Zoned it high with shadows stark Until it reached a rainbows arc Aurora borealis sky Whose hues of color made me sigh? And followed it this fragile view Until I reached the mornings dew And in the dawning of the wile I felt the whimper of a smile Puffed my cheeks in unbelief And let them blow in sheer relief I found by sifting past in mime The miracle of magic time The rhyming of the bells that sing The single note each soul would ring And so my temple kite away And left within a bright new day. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Morning Sy! What a wonderful write this is on this bright Monday morn. Very much enjoyed the read. ~Morning hugs, Nancy~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Well, now! Your joyous poem just put a smile on my heart this fine summer's morning up here in Ontario! I think I'll go fly a kite! ~ as has been suggested to me many a time! lol  Huggums, EA |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Nancy, Thank you sweety,  Earth Angel Don't foret a proper tail on you kite. LOL |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
Sy, . What a reminder of choices we can make. Enjoyed. misc. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
miscellanea Thank you so much for the read and comment. |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
I love your attitude Seymour. It is up to us to either make it a good day or a bad day. Ummm....I think I will choose ....ummm....GOOD!  Thankyou for your words of wisdom. Hugs, Chris Life itself is the most wonderful fairy tale. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Wonderfully positive thoughts this morn. Perhaps we all should reflect on this just for a moment or two.. |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
Puffed my cheeks in unbelief And let them blow in sheer relief Hilarious. this brought a chuckle to my face. and a great reminder of how we shouldn't take ourselves too seriously |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Chris Not only a good day but a great one.  Barry, It's always good to reflect. kaile, Glad you got the humor of it. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
I built a temple made of groan Cemented with a mortars moan Zoned it high with shadows stark Until it reached a rainbows arc Aurora borealis sky Whose hues of color made me sigh? And followed it this fragile view Until I reached the mornings dew And in the dawning of the wile I felt the whimper of a smile Puffed my cheeks in unbelief And let them blow in sheer relief =================================== I have a house full today Sybabers... its gonna be another crazy week here... but Im sneaking in for a min to say twas your attitude that brought me to your latitude. *L* ( got your note) TY  *ww*  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
JM, I knew you were busy and it's OK as long as you don't get dizzy. Enjoy your company and stay well. WWRS |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
I'm glad I read this before bedtime -- I'll have lovely dreams now ....thank you, Seymour!  ......jo |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
very pretty |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
You know my dear friend, I have been in a sorrowful state all day today, and could not fly my kite if I wanted to. This took my Monday frown and turned it upside down. What a wonderful poem Sy, I printed this one and will have it done in a little framed print to go up with Kit and Mike's Widow's Walk poem. Boy I miss all of you. Hugs to Isabel too of course. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sharon, You are the sweetest. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Such a great attitude... written so wonderfully! *S* I get lost in your words, my friend... and never want to leave. *S* |
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