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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Promise circles in its blow by blow Nibbling the cone of fate, melting in the moments wait Dribbling my chin in child’s smile My feet perched upon the dash Glow red that I might follow sink or splash Perhaps I should just wile a while Skyrockets paint with light the fringes fire Multiples far more than math, far more than just desire The spray of summer day, danced in effervescent bubbles play And now…the quiet folds somehow to wish me well The top is down to welcome into muse the crack and crown July burns forth the sky…a stand remands the reasons and the why Yet on this day, just intuition comes to play From in the missed, your footsteps come, aware the sideline hum That activates a summer dream back to the center of the stream My hand ignites the engine…as my heart shines on high beam Copyright Kkh 7/4/04 |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
My hand ignites the engine…as my heart shines on high beam You have such a way with words, TD! |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
ThisDiamond - just cruising with your words, as always... BC |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
"July burns forth the sky..." ~ fantastic line!!!  Not only do your heart and intuition shine on high beam, so does your talent.   EA |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Much enjoyed, TD. Hope you had a good 4th! ........jo |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
very nice write...I always enjoy you |
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Tequilia_Sunrise Senior Member
since 2003-02-19
Posts 612Lochalsh, Ontario, Canada |
great write  |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Your word play, metaphors are remarkable throughout this. I am always envious of how you manage to do this... Happy Fourth and I hope your computer is acting better for you....they can certainly be agravating... |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Wow! This is one awesome write and going into my library! hugs to you TD. Chris  Life itself is the most wonderful fairy tale. |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
TD, I read this one more than a few times. I am in awe! Your writing is more magnificent than ever. Awesome! Patricia |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Wow...!!! Eric |
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