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Snow
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desert flower looking for rain

0 posted 2004-07-05 06:51 AM


~off the cuff with some editing~




art by: joe forkan


"yet each man kills the thing he loves
by each let this be heard,
some do it with a bitter look,
some with a flattering word"
oscar wilde

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Enchantress
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Canada eh.
1 posted 2004-07-05 09:03 AM


Love this Snow.
I saw this in response to Kevin's work...
and as I said to him I think you two have the makings for a beautiful duet!
Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
Dancing with you in the summer rain ~

miscellanea
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OH
2 posted 2004-07-05 09:05 AM


absolutely beautiful, Miss Snow!
          misc.

Seymour Tabin
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3 posted 2004-07-05 09:21 AM


Snow
A properly baited hook, LOL enjoyed.

Earth Angel
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Realms of Light
4 posted 2004-07-05 09:29 AM


My goodness! This was lovely! You and Kevin would make beautiful poetic music together!


EA


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5 posted 2004-07-05 11:13 AM


Hi Snow...still loving this. I just woke back up believe it or not. LOL! So people think we would do an incredible duet together. (Snicker!) Thank-you everyone. Snow and I did do a duet once together. It didn't really get looked at much though. But still for those who would like to see what the two of us would come up with...here is the web address for the poem we did.
/pip/Forum88/HTML/002694.html

Maybe we should do a new one though. What do you think milady?

Remember, if you're not part of the future, you're history!

passing shadows
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6 posted 2004-07-05 12:37 PM


a beauty...what an write!

YES! Do another duet! Yes.

scorpio
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7 posted 2004-07-05 03:47 PM


Wonderfully written!!

believe in what your heart feels...

iliana
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8 posted 2004-07-05 03:50 PM


I read this last night (well, actually early this morning when you posted in response to his poem) -- I was hushed by it then, and brought silent by it's beauty a second time, just now, again.   ........jo
Snow
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desert flower looking for rain
9 posted 2004-07-05 04:06 PM


thank you all so much for the kind words!!

kevin.. *smiles*...thank YOU for inspiring me!!

i'm glad you brought out the link.. i love reading that piece.. and as for another one... anytime my friend.. anytime..~hugs~ you know how to reach me
S~


"yet each man kills the thing he loves
by each let this be heard,
some do it with a bitter look,
some with a flattering word"
oscar wilde

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10 posted 2004-09-08 11:06 PM


This is awesome!
Snow
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desert flower looking for rain
11 posted 2004-09-09 02:09 AM


thank you for reading this one.  


snow

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