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Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla

0 posted 2004-07-04 07:48 AM

Always Until

I cannot still the movement till
The march of spills fill moments’ mill
And cannot quell the change of rhyme
The bells of chime or the sands of time

And though I stand and hold my breath
I’m swept into the arms of death
And though I’ve learned to fly the sky
I do so on a fragile why

I fly within gossamer dew
The ever-changing old to new
The restless rue of evermore
The brew that closes every door

So if I be a fire fly
What meanings buzz the light I sigh?
What message does the dancing send?
Which fantasy will be my end?

Each drop that rings annuity
Expands beyond validity

Sunshine

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Listening to every heart

1 posted 2004-07-04 08:06 AM

I cannot still the movement till
The march of spills fill moments’ mill
And cannot quell the change of rhyme
The bells of chime or the sands of time

~*~

No, never should this moment be,
when there is not your poetry;
for each day's rhyme begins my time
of placing here my own true line...

See? You always DO inspire!

Good morning, Starshine, er, Seymour!!

Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla

2 posted 2004-07-04 08:09 AM

Sunshine
Good mornig love, you are shining bright this morning.

Honeybunch
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since 2001-12-29

Posts 7115
South Africa

3 posted 2004-07-04 08:50 AM

"And though I stand and hold my breath
I’m swept into the arms of death
And though I’ve learned to fly the sky
I do so on a fragile why"

Oh yes, don't we all. So very well said! Thank you.

Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

4 posted 2004-07-04 09:04 AM

And though I’ve learned to fly the sky
I do so on a fragile why
================================

your wisdom and humility always touch me

Ya painted wings on your rhymes with this treasure me sweet Sy-babers.

Have a nice holiday with your firecracker Isabel.

Tell her I said hello. *S*

*ww*

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

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Canada eh.

5 posted 2004-07-04 09:04 AM

Good Morning Sy and Happy Fourth of July!
Thanks for leaving the note in Forum 32..
I would never want to miss your wonderful morning writes.
I see Karilea made the tea...yes please, I'd love a cup.
Have a safe and happy holiday Sy!
~Morning hugs & Smiles, Nancy~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
Dancing with you in the summer rain ~

MARK V SHELDON
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since 2001-06-21

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In a corporeal internship...

6 posted 2004-07-04 09:25 AM

May the "until" be past the horizon, for the sunset is far, far away. A hearty day of "independence" to you, Sir.

-MVS

You CAN make a difference, but first you should learn how: http://educate-yourself.org/intro.shtml

Magnus

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since 2001-10-10

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South Carolina, USA

7 posted 2004-07-04 09:32 AM

Good morning O rhyming one of the Floridas..

Happy to see you again this day..

Seymour Tabin
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Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

8 posted 2004-07-04 10:08 AM

Honeybunch
Thank you dear and have a happy 4th.

JM,
I'll mention your regards to the firecracker. Have a happy 4th
WWRS

Nancy,
Thank you and have a happy 4th

MARK,
Thank you my friend.

Barry,
Have a good 4th my friend.

Susan
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since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

9 posted 2004-07-04 11:26 AM

Ah, I just woke up and see those on the far side of the country have already been wide awake and productive

Well, good late morning to you sir and thanks for the lovely morning read.

Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind.

Interloper

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since 2000-11-06

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Deep in the heart

10 posted 2004-07-04 11:39 AM

I have just figured out that there truly is balance in the universe. A microcosm of that balance is your rhyming and my senryus.

I loved this read my friend!

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

Seymour Tabin
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Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

11 posted 2004-07-04 11:40 AM

Susan
Good morning thank you and have a happy 4th.

Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla

12 posted 2004-07-04 11:43 AM

Interloper
Thank you my friend and have a happy 4th.

bslicker

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state of mind

13 posted 2004-07-04 11:47 AM

enjoyed such a good write on a holiday..

bernie

A smile a day keeps the world in smile's.
Bernie Slicker

Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla

14 posted 2004-07-04 12:23 PM

bernie
Thank you and have a happy 4th.

iliana
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Posts 13434
USA

15 posted 2004-07-04 12:25 PM

"Each drop that rings annuity
Expands beyond validity"

Perhaps...the humor in the universe. Always expanding. What a great write, Seymour! Happy and safe 4th!

passing shadows
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displaced

16 posted 2004-07-04 12:26 PM

enjoyed

Happy Fourth, Sy

Martie

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17 posted 2004-07-04 12:53 PM

"So if I be a fire fly
What meanings buzz the light I sigh?
What message does the dancing send?
Which fantasy will be my end?"

We all ask to know
the reasons, the way, the why
just not as beautifully as you do, Sy.

SimplyGold
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since 2002-07-10

Posts 1453

18 posted 2004-07-04 01:11 PM

Wish I could write like this:

"And though I stand and hold my breath
I’m swept into the arms of death
And though I’ve learned to fly the sky
I do so on a fragile why"

Very fine indeed.

SG

Earth Angel
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Realms of Light

19 posted 2004-07-04 01:25 PM

I am beginning to understand...

EA

Seymour Tabin
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Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

20 posted 2004-07-04 01:30 PM

SimplyGold
Thank you and have a happy.

Martie
You are a sweetheart.

passing,
Thank you dear.

iliana
You are kind.

miscellanea
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since 2004-06-24

Posts 4060
OH

21 posted 2004-07-04 04:04 PM

Thank goodness I didn't miss this!
Happppy 4th of July!
miscellanea

Corinne
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Posts 5167
state of confusion

22 posted 2004-07-04 04:51 PM

loved

And though I’ve learned to fly the sky
I do so on a fragile why

Corinne

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

23 posted 2004-07-04 05:13 PM

Earth Angel,

miscellanea
Thank you so much.

Corinne,

thank you sweety.

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

24 posted 2004-07-04 08:21 PM

Seymour~
LOVE your gossamer dew~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

[email protected]

Seymour Tabin
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Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

25 posted 2004-07-04 09:26 PM

Marge,
Happy 4th of july.

Bill Charles
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highways, & byways, for now

26 posted 2004-07-04 09:52 PM

Seymour - there you go again with another great write...

BC

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

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Tamarac Fla

27 posted 2004-07-04 11:01 PM

Why thank you Bill

Tequilia_Sunrise
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Lochalsh, Ontario, Canada

28 posted 2004-07-05 03:59 AM

enjoyed this very much

EvocativeVerse2
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Posts 1279

29 posted 2004-07-05 06:25 AM

Hey Seymour! Love this piece my friend. It is always good to peek at your work!

Remember, if you're not part of the future, you're history!

Seymour Tabin
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Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

30 posted 2004-07-05 07:20 AM

Tequilia,
And I enjoy tequilia. LOL thank you

Evocative,
Glad you took a peek, thank you.

milkweed
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since 2004-09-07

Posts 42
fields of gold

31 posted 2004-09-08 11:03 PM

I liked this very much. It makes me ask questions of myself.

Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla

32 posted 2004-09-08 11:26 PM

milkweed,
That's good and thank you.

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