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of melancholic shades
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of melancholic shades |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium 
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melancholy is a strainer - sieving leaves of life's tea as we all sit under the shadows of the moonlit sky remembering darn them, these moments trapped in memories photographs fading on bright walls rock stars who died young flowers wilting at summer's end them that stay behind in grey matter of the mind are perhaps, the most fortunate for, unlike the everyday cycle of daybreak and sunset, they were special they are just as the moments where they waltzed through the ones to be taken pleasure from to be enjoyed like dance in the rain and unforgettable smiles even in black and white and a thousand shades of grey and countless feels of blue *** wrote this for a friend who was feeling melancholic |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sudhir, All true, all true, enjoyed. |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
how lovely this was...filled with visuals one can see, feel and hear....very brilliantly done...enjoyed. |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA |
You even make being melancholic sound euphoric...don't worry it's not supposed to make sense..but sounded good in my mind and I guess thats all that matters  If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried. |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
When we sift through emotions coloured by melancholia how well we remember all the little things that should be forgotten. Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
Yes, melancholic shades do serve a purpose...how well you've described the places they take us, Sudhir. Saving this for my next trip there... ~K~ |
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Soleil Noir Senior Member
since 2001-12-19
Posts 688USA |
...and countless feels of blue ~*~ Suddy, you continue to improve with time... and this one, my friend, is a  |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
I love reading your work, Sudhir!  ...jo |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
This is wonderful! A joy to read. Reading your words just makes a person feel good.  |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
this is good...I'm sure your friend will enjoy it...I know I did |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
doing what I can my friends and trying to do what I can... thanks a lot for coming by and for your kind words of acceptance... regards sudhir |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
melancholy is a strainer - sieving leaves of life's tea as we all sit under the shadows of the moonlit sky remembering You've written such truth... and written it with such gentle beauty. *S* |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
So gently and honestly said..very beautiful Sudhir. One of your best.... Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
yes...even in black and white I enjoyed your words today, Sudhir M |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
many many thanks to each one of you, my friends... Regards Sudhir |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Enjoyed the read PoetFriendSudhir *~coco~* |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
much enjoyed the read! Roniece Dawson-Bruce |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice read |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
awww Sudhir, I have missed you. I am feeling just this, today. |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Sudhir lyer, Hi very nice to be reading this wonderful piece of work, I loved the way you used events and colors to paint such a lovely poem. Cerenity |
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Contabo Member
since 2001-11-21
Posts 159 |
I am melancholic 99.99% of my life it seems. Perhaps someday you can write me. Contabo |
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