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Open Poetry #33

Of Evening's Breeze...

Tim
Senior Member

since 1999-06-08

Posts 1794

0 posted 2004-10-12 06:47 PM

Walk softly, stepping not on evening's breeze
as on the path of eventide, across land's scape
you traverse from light of day to dark of night.

Behind, day's bustle fades as does the sun
while ahead night's curtain in majestic rise reveals
Venus, evening's Queen, beckoning forth her minions.

Feel soft the kiss of vesper's wind upon your skin,
As on the path of eventide you journey day to night,
Aye, walk softly, step you not on evening's breeze.

Mark Bohannan
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-21

Posts 7269
In the winds of Cherokee song

1 posted 2004-10-12 08:23 PM

Now this one gave me some peaceful and beautiful images. I really liked this and I believe this is the first of yours that I have read. I will be looking for more for sure. Especially liked the lines below.
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Feel soft the kiss of vesper's wind upon your skin,
As on the path of eventide you journey day to night,

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

2 posted 2004-10-12 08:28 PM

Very soothing feel to this write Tim.
Very much enjoyed.
Hugs~

~Autumn..the year's last, loveliest smile.~

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

3 posted 2004-10-12 09:02 PM

Sir, once again you touch the silver sheen of dreams, and quiet...
Thank you.

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