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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio 
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Departing on this ashen dawn, their spread of wings across on the sky, upon the sycamores they soon repose, abandonning the frost that climbs, on vines where summer blooms had grown, and in remiss upon their fading song, the darkfaced windows view the morn, around a single branch such exit and arrival twine, my unshed body waits, for now, a mere dividing line. |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
ohhhhhh this is outstanding!! love it!  "cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind" |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
Very nice write gal...but I know better..you "shaved it" just for me..right? |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
i giggle at Toe... but incredible write..i think my favourite of yours thus far  |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
thanks i wasnt so sure about it; but thanks for the support toe is a silly goose isn't he? |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Just like you said before, Michele the Leaf Goddess for sure . . . this is beautiful |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
This poem sounds as good as it reads. I enjoyed reading it out loud.  Warm, autumnal hugs, EA |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Oh my gosh!! This is SO beautiful! Love it Michele! Hugs~ ~Autumn..the year's last, loveliest smile.~ |
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