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reflections of poetic light
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reflections of poetic light |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia 
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If I were to paint you would you be blue today? or bursting bright in orange delight, reflecting the sunshine’s glow? My palette is a mess these days muddy hues swirl themselves without warning as if skies were storming themselves away relentlessly upon an endless horizon But wait a minute... the brush suddenly cries, tells me my palette lies, and if I simply hold my brush at a different angle rainbows shall fall upon my blank canvas as if sent just for me to see the miles of darkness fade even as the sun sets I see reflections of poetic light surrounding me. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Kacy~ Sweet lady ... you ARE poetic light~ How much I enjoy the versatility of your thoughts~ This one has a softness about it that becomes you~  BIG OLE *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
rainbows shall fall upon my blank canvas as if sent just for me to see the miles of darkness fade even as the sun sets I see reflections of poetic light surrounding me. well now Kacy gal...this side of you is such a treat for us to see and read.... my gawd woman....this is beautiful and those above lines... IWIHWT!!! The greatest beauty on earth, is |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Marge and Donna, you both are so kind, always shining in a rainbow of sweetness.  |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
Kacy...you are such a beautiful soul. This is so touching, so reflective of you. It's got to be one of your best (do I say that every time?). Keeping it... K |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
The way I see it, your palette holds more than just the primary colors. I enjoyed this one much and the softness reigns in this one. |
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babygirlwlove Senior Member
since 2004-10-10
Posts 1180New York City |
very nice visuals and soothe...to this... **babygirL** |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Kacy, Very nice and I loved the last line!  "cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind" |
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kayjay Member Elite
since 2002-06-24
Posts 2015Oregon |
When we change our viewpoint, we change the picture. This is a different side to your writing. I really liked it. Ken Through rubble and trouble and dark of night |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
...thinking this one needs bumped back up so others have a chance to enjoy too  |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
mmmm... a new favorite of mine from your pen.. enoyed this ma'am... really enjoyed this |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Kacy, you are an artist and a poet after my own heart!    Linda |
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