reflections of poetic light

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Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

0 posted 2004-10-13 07:42 PM

If I were to paint you
     would you be blue today?
or bursting bright in orange delight,
     reflecting the sunshine’s glow?

My palette is a mess these days
     muddy hues swirl themselves without warning
as if skies were storming themselves away
     relentlessly upon an endless horizon

But wait a minute...
the brush suddenly cries,
tells me my palette lies,
and if I simply hold my brush
at a different angle

rainbows shall fall upon my blank canvas
     as if sent just for me to see
the miles of darkness fade
     even as the sun sets

I see reflections of poetic light
     surrounding me.

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

1 posted 2004-10-13 07:50 PM

Kacy~
Sweet lady ... you ARE poetic light~
How much I enjoy the versatility of your thoughts~

This one has a softness about it that becomes you~

BIG OLE *Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

2 posted 2004-10-13 08:16 PM

rainbows shall fall upon my blank canvas
     as if sent just for me to see
the miles of darkness fade
     even as the sun sets

I see reflections of poetic light
     surrounding me.

well now Kacy gal...this side of you is such a treat for us to see and read....
my gawd woman....this is beautiful and those above lines...
IWIHWT!!!

The greatest beauty on earth, is
found in the hearts of those
who love....

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

3 posted 2004-10-13 08:37 PM

Marge and Donna, you both are so kind, always shining in a rainbow of sweetness.

Kahlil
Senior Member

since 2003-04-12

Posts 1881

4 posted 2004-10-13 09:11 PM

Kacy...you are such a beautiful soul.
This is so touching, so reflective of you.
It's got to be one of your best (do I say that every time?). Keeping it...

K

Mark Bohannan
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-21

Posts 7269
In the winds of Cherokee song

5 posted 2004-10-14 02:06 AM

The way I see it, your palette holds more than just the primary colors. I enjoyed this one much and the softness reigns in this one.

babygirlwlove
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since 2004-10-10

Posts 1180
New York City