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Open Poetry #33
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nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines

0 posted 2004-10-18 11:09 AM



to quietly slip away
unnoticed and obscure
till the blurring ceases
and I am no more...

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Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
1 posted 2004-10-18 11:12 AM



It's good to know
I am not alone...

nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
2 posted 2004-10-18 11:14 AM


you will never be alone...

I, on the other hand

back
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Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving
3 posted 2004-10-18 11:16 AM


hurting

too much....

feeling you here

Earth Angel
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Realms of Light
4 posted 2004-10-18 11:18 AM


I keep deleting my responses because they are all inadequate in expressing how your poem affected me.


Linda

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state of mind
5 posted 2004-10-18 12:15 PM


hurry hit the return button
back to the front of the line.
bernie

A smile a day keeps the world in smile's.
Bernie Slicker

babygirlwlove
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6 posted 2004-10-18 12:17 PM


oh damn...succint...

but no less intense...

**babygirL**

LeeJ
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7 posted 2004-10-18 12:36 PM


well, I'm going to send this one right back up to the top, where you and your words belong.  Smiles and hugs
Enchantress
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Canada eh.
8 posted 2004-10-18 01:02 PM


Gawd I wish we lived closer Maureen.
Sending heart hugs your way.

~Autumn..the year's last, loveliest smile.~

NewEnglandlazurlu
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A Mountain Paradise
9 posted 2004-10-18 01:23 PM


Sening you a hug Maureen so you'll know you aren't alone.

huggles sweet lady, Marti

A single sunbeam is enough to drive away many shadows.
–St. Francis of Assisi

Larry C
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10 posted 2004-10-18 03:34 PM


Wishing virtual hugs helped...

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

passing shadows
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displaced
11 posted 2004-11-05 09:41 AM


dang
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12 posted 2004-11-05 09:08 PM


M,


~Alli~

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Don’t cry because it’s over, smile because it happened...

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