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Under Siege
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Under Siege |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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Siege Under debating the finalness of it all the letters to words to sentences to non meanings creating a false world where fingers stiff from cold walk alone surrendering to the now being blamed for the colorless rainbow once arced, fluorescent and beautiful once there overshadowing it all these many years, already too many spreading thin the feminine side of me bringing out the silent stare of one under seige knowing "too late" had replaced the forever one can twist the dreams become trapped in Autumn's breath( a borrowed phrase) and live in these troubled waters( another) the once bathing in vanilla past for the body's reaction as to all things once loved has become adverse to circumstance debating the issues amongst me, myself and I clashing with all that once mattered waiting for the resolutions that may never come... M "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." |
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INclan Senior Member
since 1999-07-20
Posts 1024Indiana, USA |
I find myself on the cusp...of "too late". Not yet...but soon. Thanx for posting Inclan |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
"debating the issues amongst me, myself and I clashing with all that once mattered waiting for the resolutions that may never come..." and I think for me the secret was in learning how to recognize when the resolutions weren't going to come and moving on... life is so hard sometimes.. and you do that feeling justice in your writing.  "cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind" |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
*sigh in understanding* |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
Only three replies so far!  I'll have to make it four! lol."debating the issues amongst me, myself and I clashing with all that once mattered waiting for the resolutions that may never come..." I really liked that part...great write. ~Alli~ *:.AIM = Alli4000.:* My Journal |
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