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~K~
Member

since 2004-07-27

Posts 148

0 posted 2004-10-10 07:07 AM

...upon us

It is Now
happening
over & over

we pretend
the future's
coming

when it is
(in fact)
all around us

Dark Angel
Member Patricius

since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

1 posted 2004-10-10 07:14 AM

oh indeed... and I hear its hum as well.

Great to read you.

cuz fate is not just whose cooking smells good
but which way the wind blows

~ani difranco~

~K~
Member

since 2004-07-27

Posts 148

2 posted 2004-10-10 07:23 AM

It hums
it comes undone
it make believes
a brighter tomorrow
it is sorrows
distant cousin
it is the infestation
at a cellular level
that never proves to
be distatseful
in the eyes
of God.

Dark Angel
Member Patricius

since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

3 posted 2004-10-10 08:08 AM

and only
in the eyes
of god
we shall see it

its ugliness
all-embracing
coming to ground
victorious

cuz fate is not just whose cooking smells good
but which way the wind blows

~ani difranco~

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

4 posted 2004-10-10 08:47 AM

The moment holds it all, yes.

Beautiful dialogue between you and Dark Angel.

Love, Margherita

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

5 posted 2004-10-10 09:24 AM

~K~
Nodding in understanding here~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

Email noles1@totcon.com

wranx
Member Elite

since 2002-06-07

Posts 3689
Moved from a shack to a barn

6 posted 2004-10-11 03:20 PM

A nod and a bump

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

7 posted 2004-10-11 04:35 PM

definitely . . .
keep it going . . .

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

8 posted 2004-10-11 04:45 PM

Wonderful...excellent!!!
Hugs~

~Autumn..the year's last, loveliest smile.~

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

9 posted 2004-10-11 07:03 PM

excellent!

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

10 posted 2004-10-11 10:07 PM

l@ved the second act, how about a third?

muted

Member Elite

since 2004-01-15

Posts 2949
Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving

11 posted 2004-10-17 11:27 PM

RMW
Senior Member

since 2001-03-21

Posts 1424

12 posted 2004-10-18 05:48 PM

This is very nicely done.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

13 posted 2004-11-05 09:38 AM

very cool

*Alli4000*

Member Elite

since 2004-03-21

Posts 3188
The World of Poetry

14 posted 2004-11-05 09:02 PM

~K~, this is beautiful!!

~Alli~

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