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poe
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since 2004-09-06

Posts 180
Heading to China

0 posted 2004-10-18 07:40 AM

Unseen Beauty buried deep with in
The entire world passed it by
Yet I see it in the way it was meant
Peering deep inside the soul, using the eyes of the heart
A cavalcade of emotions, pull into view
The sun sets into her eyes
No longer does she just let her heart be
A fire so strong that it burns the rest of the world and just leaves us
How impossible love has become
But a fight I shall give to win her my way
Underestimated is my heart, but love shall shine strong from it
For her, doing anything is not enough
Someone who has captured my heart
And let loose the love inside me
Letting me see that there are things to live for
And just like Romeo and Juliet
Some things are worth dieing for

Tomorrow comes for those who fear it.
Today never ends for those who live it.

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

1 posted 2004-10-18 08:24 AM

Very Powerful write...deep and vivid emotions. TD

miscellanea
Member Elite

since 2004-06-24

Posts 4060
OH

2 posted 2004-10-18 09:16 AM

Yes. VERY powerful. This is a real keeper!
A pleasure to read...
miscellanea

poe
Member

since 2004-09-06

Posts 180
Heading to China

3 posted 2004-10-18 06:19 PM

Thank You ThisDiamond, and miscellanea thank you both for your kind words.

Tomorrow comes for those who fear it.
Today never ends for those who live it.

froggy
Senior Member

since 2003-06-23

Posts 1893
Michigan

4 posted 2004-10-20 02:38 AM

Hi Poe,

This is beautiful.

:-)

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

5 posted 2004-10-20 07:05 AM

Grinning here...this left the reader with a lot of wonderfully warm thoughts. Does anyone fight for their love today? Or do they just give up and walk away, when things become unrested. The unrests sometimes come with everyday changes...but between two mature, communicative and caring adults, the unrests can lead us towards a much closer relationship...building blocks for the next changes that occur...

Smiles and hugs to you, and wishing you my best regards for much success.

poe
Member

since 2004-09-06

Posts 180
Heading to China

6 posted 2004-10-21 05:26 PM

Thank You froggy for the nice compliment.
Thank You LeeJ, I am glad that you took a liking to my poem. It is sad to say that not many people fight for love anymore.
Love is beautiful and more often then not it is cast aside for something shiny and new.
Thank You as well for those encouraging comments.

Tomorrow comes for those who fear it.
Today never ends for those who live it.

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