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Professor Gloom
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0 posted 2004-10-18 06:08 AM



What breeze
Shakes colored trees
Stripping away their leaves
Whipping and ripping the reign of Autumn,
Preparing for the cold to come,
Harvesting all done
So to enter
Winter.

Gloom


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miscellanea
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1 posted 2004-10-18 09:11 AM


Very pretty and representative of our weather this morning.  Where I live, it is predicted we'll have some real gully washers today!  That's ok, though, as new rock and fossils will appear in the creek beds afterward.

Enjoyed.

               miscellanea

Sunshine
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2 posted 2004-10-18 11:13 AM


What breeze, indeed...
Enjoyed this very much, Professor.
Thank you.

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3 posted 2004-10-18 02:14 PM


You did the lady Fall up well.  The breeze of turning seasons is my favorite.
Susan Caldwell
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4 posted 2004-10-18 02:15 PM




Nice Gloomy.

"cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind"
~Sarah McLachlan~

Copperbell
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5 posted 2004-10-18 03:40 PM


We have snow-

no more breezes
no more colored leaves
no more colors

but I love it!

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