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Jaws
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Jaws |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state 
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Curious picture of adults atop a mandible image what if the jaws had clamped shut yet people like fish will move in schools Squalus wets its appetite once saliva drools the mayor says its preposterous creature should invade an island beach but the ocean is a place for turns of events plays between the tourist hungry beach owners and the avid shark whistle blower. Picture ones taken on small boats to sea their first excursion in the ocean's wake its denizen strikes without a chance hardly a sequel to marine romance... years later the same beaches are open family mags publish hero stories surfer goes back to do the thing he likes the mayor is happy lifeguards won't strike... in a standoff between the ocean deep and the ones that wander in people like fish move out in schools the great whites home in on other tools. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Now I'm going to have that Jaws music in my head, so I don't DARE go to bed until I read something soothing. LOL, a good write, Martin. Yep...just like a school of fish, and some kind of JAWS will always be out there, waiting to catch us unawares. |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams |
I really liked this. I had to read this twice. Doesn't happen often, but maybe I read in too deep. Good write. Juju |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
excellent write martin, how goes it dans la belle province? is everyone in black mourning the death of the nhl season? I know i am, i miss mes habitants..sighs means i'll have to wait another year for stanley  |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
sure alot of people are sad there not here, on the bright side I get to see films I haven't in the time slot |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
very true, besides it adds another year to the wait of maple leaf fans which is always a good thing |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Great write! Eric |
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