Open Poetry #33 |
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arrythmias |
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Midnitesun![]()
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia ![]() |
Arrythmias bring me back to center when I drift too far outside for my own good an imbalance within my equilibrium then WHAM! everything stops for a split second, and that’s when I acknowledge Time is of the essence and I might not have as much as I’d like. So I take the moment, breathe deeply of life, and when I exhale, remember I am forever in that last breath. |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Great write, Kacy! I will remember this.......*hugs*....jo |
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Midnitesun![]()
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
HUGGING you back, thank you, for being here, and understanding what this one means. |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
"and that’s when I acknowledge Time is of the essence and I might not have as much as I’d like." That's how I feel every morning when the alarm goes off... ![]() Mornin' Jiminy!! |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
tremendous ponderings...when it all is said and done...it's not about any material thing but it's about what we've truly accomplished for the good of others...wearing a name plate of steel...which reads....care and kindness, not of material things, but encouragement for the truth of life. |
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Contabo Member
since 2001-11-21
Posts 159 |
I enjoyed. Contabo |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
good God, no kidding! Forever in that last breath . . . Talk about seizing the day! |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
Keeping this one, Kacy. It's a great reminder. I certainly feel as though you're talking to me...thanks, I needed that! K |
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babygirlwlove Senior Member
since 2004-10-10
Posts 1180New York City |
"bring me back to center" I like that! Feeling the movement in this...lovely.. **babygirL** |
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RMW Senior Member
since 2001-03-21
Posts 1424 |
Ah, yes. There's nothing like a skipped beat for centering the soul. Nicely done. I share the condition, be it a gift or an affliction. Bob |
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kayjay Member Elite
since 2002-06-24
Posts 2015Oregon |
It is a sobering notion to know that every breath might be our last. Well spoken. KJ Through rubble and trouble and dark of night |
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J.Samm Member
since 2004-01-12
Posts 415Iloilo City, Philippines |
lovely write, and there is so much wisdom here: "So I take the moment, breathe deeply of life, and when I exhale, remember I am forever in that last breath." |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
Hey Pal, An epiphany worth having, sharing, and living. Good morning to you. -MVS You CAN make a difference, but first you should learn how: http://educate-yourself.org/intro.shtml |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Man, being dragged out of THAT dream... and I rarely want to slam the clock... but sometimes... ![]() |
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EagleScorpion Senior Member
since 2000-03-08
Posts 1644Here, Now, Forever |
if only you couldstaythere i give you 2 thumbs up for this |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
life is like the skip of a beat to meet challanges and taste defeat... but here we are for some strange reason even if that depends on a change of season.. |
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mysticpoe Senior Member
since 2003-02-28
Posts 883 |
Clever write, with a very smooth and pondering ending. Nice Kacy. wayne If nothing is something |
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Midnitesun![]()
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
I'm breathing this whole thread in deeply, so that means, y'all go wherever I go. ![]() |
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