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Call It Love
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Call It Love |
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babygirlwlove Senior Member
since 2004-10-10
Posts 1180New York City 
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Call it love in the pulpy sieve between heartbeats, soaked to the hollow of breasts pressed to bone, whose tones now elude me, call on love to lay on open wounds some emollient simile, cleavage of hazelnut flesh tucked in the deep comas of the lotus moon, as it heaves its silver light, seamless over mines of silence and wild conundrum, a verdict to strum the dreaming soul, numb to its honeycomb flesh, hues of cocky silks and milky visions now muave and tender as fresh bruises peruse the Road strewn with roses, roses wild with loss, in places where the split morrow by one sorrow, lies hewn in the dark, but not the dark that was ever dreamed, call it love, given over to the lean body's natural inclination toward betrayal, as it wakens in a caterwaul of dying, between two hearts, this urgency to beat the words back, is stacked against the moonlight's resonant sequitur. Moonlight Series 2004 copyright babygirLPress |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I wish I could just leave a beatific smile. But? When I grow up I wanna write just like you. You're like a huge magnificent fish, with universes living on your scales. (that's right, call me barnacle) watching you do this magick a "wow" again |
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babygirlwlove Senior Member
since 2004-10-10
Posts 1180New York City |
lol...ok serenity...you are so funny...I still haven't figured out what i want to be when I grow up....lol... your love & support is deeply felt and greatly appreciated... thank you, **babygirL** |
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Mysteria 
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Mari, you will teach many here how to swim  in the wonder of words I am sure. Whatever you put you pen to is solid gold. Can't wait to buy your book, the last one, and the next one! |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Your work is rich with texture and mood - enveloping.  SusanHappiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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babygirlwlove Senior Member
since 2004-10-10
Posts 1180New York City |
Mysteria... you are spoiling me rotten...(((thank you))) much love, **babygirL** |
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babygirlwlove Senior Member
since 2004-10-10
Posts 1180New York City |
Susan... thank you for the warm reply... **babygirL** |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
um..you're not allowed to ever leave this site. there are a few poets on the site whose talent i absolutely envy, i've just expanded my list |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
this was amazing...and adding to the highlights of these blue pages....your one I'll seek out....thank you |
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babygirlwlove Senior Member
since 2004-10-10
Posts 1180New York City |
Aenimal...(love your tag, BTW)...thanks for hitting this...and truly...I don't intend to leave anytime soon...thanks for the love, **babygirL** |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
Don't believe Aenimal..he saw your sexy picture and is becoming an animal...he's probably already headed over to the mature content section just to fantasize over your picture there....(words with pics really get him aroused).....Like I told you before, I'm the quiet-wall flower type and just kind of stay to myself, write very subdued terrible poetry but I watch over all the young innocent gals here for predators like Aenimal).....LOL |
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babygirlwlove Senior Member
since 2004-10-10
Posts 1180New York City |
LeeJ.. thanks for seeking me out...much appreciated.. **babygirL** |
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babygirlwlove Senior Member
since 2004-10-10
Posts 1180New York City |
Toe~ can I call you toe? lol... "....(words with pics really get him aroused" as they do me...lol... you are so sweet, thank you, love... **babygirL** |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
"Don't believe Aenimal..he saw your sexy picture and is becoming an animal..." shows what you know Toe, i'm always an animal and while i won't deny there's a certain aesthetically appealling quality( how clinical was that) to the photograph i really do mean what i say about your poetry. i mean, you've seen Toe's writes, we're desperately in need of talent to offset them. "Like I told you before, I'm the quiet-wall flower type and just kind of stay to myself, write very subdued terrible poetry but I watch over all the young innocent gals here for predators like Aenimal).....LOL" predator? lol yes my carnal conquests are legendary.  wallflower? subdued? you know, it works better when you don't burst out laughing at the end Toe grins |
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babygirlwlove Senior Member
since 2004-10-10
Posts 1180New York City |
Aenimal~ "i'm always an animal and while i won't deny there's a certain aesthetically appealling quality( how clinical was that) to the photograph i really do mean what i say about your poetry." ummmmm..ok..I am going to take that as a compliment...LOL...it's ok...I dig animals...and predators ...and toes...LOL **babygirL** |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
clinical words mean toe can't say "See i told you so!" grins |
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babygirlwlove Senior Member
since 2004-10-10
Posts 1180New York City |
lol...you are so funny...thanks for the love... **babygirL** |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
See?...I told ya so?...Oh wait, I can't say that..actually, though Aenimal crackers and I disagree politically,,,,,(I'm right and he's confused)....he really is a nice guy and though I hate to admit it...I do admire him somewhat...(he also agreed to fork over the one dollar bills for the strip club if I drove)......but seriously, (something I usually always try to adhere to)....welcome to passions gal...and despite Aenimal..you'll probably be pretty safe here....If he ever asks for your phone number or home address though...don't give it to him..(give it to me...I'll make sure it's okay to pass it on).... |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
smooth, he's smooth that one, like gravel |
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babygirlwlove Senior Member
since 2004-10-10
Posts 1180New York City |
Toe~ LMAO...thanks for the warmest welcome I have ever rec'd on a poetry board.... LOL... peace & ONE **babygirL** |
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babygirlwlove Senior Member
since 2004-10-10
Posts 1180New York City |
like gravel....lol awwwww poor toe... you guys are insane...(LMAO) thanks again fella's **babygirL** |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
Yea...yasee?...I'm gravelly..he's groveling.... [This message has been edited by Toerag (10-15-2004 05:53 PM).] |
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babygirlwlove Senior Member
since 2004-10-10
Posts 1180New York City |
LOL..omg... silly toe much love, **babygirL** |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
You make me sigh.... I love the moods and the imagery you create with your words. and I echo Aenimal....YOU are NOT allowed to leave this place. Maree p.s I'm keeping this. cuz fate is not just whose cooking smells good |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
babygirlwlove You cast your net and caught my love  |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
jumping in here to say...I enjoyed your words today "call it love, given over to the lean body's natural inclination toward betrayal, as it wakens in a caterwaul of dying, between two hearts, this urgency to beat the words back, is stacked against the moonlight's resonant sequitur. " M |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
Call it an embodiment of form-fitting illusory allusion... -MVS You CAN make a difference, but first you should learn how: http://educate-yourself.org/intro.shtml |
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babygirlwlove Senior Member
since 2004-10-10
Posts 1180New York City |
thank you all for stopping in on my lunacy... love&light, **babygirL** |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Your feel for word tones is exquisite -- something worth studying...and applying once the study's done! Good stuff here...very good. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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babygirlwlove Senior Member
since 2004-10-10
Posts 1180New York City |
thank you, again...ratleader... love&light, **babygirL** |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
I am very impressed with what I've read. Stellar writing! |
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babygirlwlove Senior Member
since 2004-10-10
Posts 1180New York City |
wranx...thank you for the warm reply... love&light, **babygirL** |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
your poetry is tactile... i touch it feel it sink my whole into every word definitely worth watching you for a while ...as for aenimal....he's a hotty |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Raph a hottie? Get out are you Raph? Wow what a game, this poem of yours about sums up my emotions in the 11th inning of this game between NY and Boston. I call baseball real love! |
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babygirlwlove Senior Member
since 2004-10-10
Posts 1180New York City |
muted & Mysteria... thank you for stopping to peek inside... **babygirL** |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
You know, ALL I did was reply to a poem. Slaps forehead. Before I huddle all fetal like in my corner from embarassment a few things All apologies to babygirl for the thread hijack(a common occurence when Toe is involved, like his favourite politicians he's sneaky, underhanded and lies alot) muted it's seriously high time you got that laser eye surgery already and Mysteria, you remember the pic i had up, unless hottie means 'looks like an escaped mental patient' , no *apologizes profusely and huddles in his corner never to reply to poetry again |
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babygirlwlove Senior Member
since 2004-10-10
Posts 1180New York City |
Aenimal... no apologies necessary...lol... and please send the pic..(smile)... **babygirL** |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
i would but then amnesty international gets all up in my face for cruel and unusual punishment well anyway welcome again and as you can see from this thread pip is a warm and caring asylum..forum..i meant forum |
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babygirlwlove Senior Member
since 2004-10-10
Posts 1180New York City |
**LMAO**...no doubt it is ...lovely, lovely site... thanks again for the smiles this AM... **babygirL** |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
BL~ Welcome to the lunacy of the PiP forums~ 'some emollient simile, cleavage of hazelnut flesh tucked in the deep comas of the lotus moon' I really like that~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
ahahaha asylum is right! *laughing* babygirl? You have fallen into something you will never be able to escape mwauahahahahah . . . Your writing is devine . . . to say the least |
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babygirlwlove Senior Member
since 2004-10-10
Posts 1180New York City |
Marge.... thank you for the warm reply and the warm welcome... **babygirL** |
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babygirlwlove Senior Member
since 2004-10-10
Posts 1180New York City |
littlewing: "babygirl? You have fallen into something you will never be able to escape " now that, is the story of my life! LOL...Thank you so much for all the warmth & smiles... **babygirL** |
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