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mysticpoe
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0 posted 2004-10-17 04:05 PM



How could I otherwise disguise
what was brought by the Navajo winds.
As you cradled one universe
for those sibling causes.
The other - for the ultimate
balance and determination.
Smaller than,
what is known to be small.
Larger than vested seductions
of liberalized pain.
You are
and cry in us both.

Follow the river bed you say,
beyond what is owned.
Behind all your faraway stars,
where the Born's are.
It will be there
the fish know no water...
...and all thoughts,
will have no time to escape.

If nothing is something
then everything is
our thoughts and feelings
and all that exists.

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VAS
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1 posted 2004-10-17 04:52 PM


beautiful, ethereal, soothing...yet I have to admit I don't understand the phrase, "where the Born's are"

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

miscellanea
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2 posted 2004-10-17 05:00 PM


A pleasure to read your writing!  I echo the response of VAS,
           miscellanea

Martie
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3 posted 2004-10-17 05:15 PM


Very interesting, with a surreal feel to it.  Enjoyed!
mysticpoe
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4 posted 2004-10-17 05:15 PM


Thank you VAS and Cathy. The Born's are, the beginning place, where the secret of life lies. Behind the stars, that other place we're not able to see - now. Hope this help's and thanks again for stopping by.

wayne

If nothing is something
then everything is
our thoughts and feelings
and all that exists.

mysticpoe
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5 posted 2004-10-17 05:17 PM


Thanks Martie, appreciate the read.

wayne

If nothing is something
then everything is
our thoughts and feelings
and all that exists.

Midnitesun
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Gaia
6 posted 2004-10-17 05:53 PM


Questing...the journey begins and ends
at the same point.

I'll be happy to keep this in a safe place.

VAS
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7 posted 2004-10-17 05:56 PM


Wayne, I thought that may be so, but wanted to know more certainly. Thanks!

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

ThisDiamond
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8 posted 2004-10-17 08:10 PM


I saw painted here...woman
Caring for the twin sides of man
Somehow a sacred wind blows across these words with it's own agenda.
Wonderful.
TD

mysticpoe
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9 posted 2004-10-18 08:38 AM


Kacy, starts and ends at the same point. I thought about just that - a lot. Especially when time as we know will not (or might not?) exist after all this. So where does it begin and end? Great response!!

VAS, thanks again for your insight. Please stop by again!!

TD, I saw painted here...woman
Caring for the twin sides of man.  Outstanding response. It just added to my own perspective. Thank you very much..

Thank's to all of you again, I'm honored to be in your company.

wayne

If nothing is something
then everything is
our thoughts and feelings
and all that exists.

littlewing
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New York
10 posted 2004-10-18 08:51 AM


Wayne,

this is beautiful
especially this time of year
It reminded me of the tale of the tortoise shell.

*smile*  

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