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Of Her Worth
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Of Her Worth |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams 
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Of her worth How's her Value determend? By convienience or her end? In a world where genocide Isn't always homocide, will she live or have no life? In this land of just and rife. Who's saying what's wrong or right? It's she that loses this fight. Children die every day, And suddenly it's ok. So tell me of her worth. Juju. Sorry I was in a bad mood when I wrote this, This is a pro life poem. Sorry I messed it up. [This message has been edited by Juju (10-17-2004 06:52 PM).] |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
Valuing her worth In her estimation Where policy decides Future For those Who doubt Their own worth But not in the jungle As the jungle has laws Fair and unfair To lose When another's thoughts Have no value Dave |
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exhale Senior Member
since 2003-06-13
Posts 646Alberta,Canada |
i really liked this poem,i could feel the depth. |
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J.Samm Member
since 2004-01-12
Posts 415Iloilo City, Philippines |
who says what's wrong or right?... people have various opinions of what is wrong or right...but it always ends up with you deciding what to do...good poem, very thought- provoking  |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams |
I really messed up this poem. I left out the last two stanza's I'll send the revised version some time I supose. Dave I liked your poem. This poem is actually a prolife poem. I am glad you liked this poem. That stanza is a commanding statement, actually. I didn't lable it appropriatly. um.......... Sorry. juju |
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