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murs de soie (walls of silk)
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murs de soie (walls of silk) |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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le ciel a des côtés the sky has sides where the moon is a lover with a million hands you speak of touch like it was gold and your heart dreams of being wealthy you make shapes in water with your finger ends I watch you paint there on your lips with wet you look at your hands and whisper songs you reach for mine then and ask to borrow them to take them to heaven to help them find the secrets of eden that lie just beyond seduction in walls of silk ___________ Dark |
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babygirlwlove Senior Member
since 2004-10-10
Posts 1180New York City |
wow...you can capture the tender stillness of a photograph moment and paint the loveliest hues on the heart.... almost forgot how deft you are at this...lol..great poem, dark! **babygirL** |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
mmm and naughty language seduction, too... how you say more, more? K |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
"the sky has sides where the moon is a lover with a million hands" I adored that! a million hands....able to hold you up as they melt you down..  "cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind" |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
you speak of touch like it was gold and your heart dreams of being wealthy ~*~ Look at a baby's face, when held in hands that speak of touch... and you will know heaven... people forget, as they age, what it's like to be a baby of love... |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Hi there Mr. Delicate weaver of words...  You've created a painting here...it's beautiful..... there is nothing more complete, then two friends exploring life together, reaching out to & for each other, finding answers, together, this speaks volumns of great care more so, about others then self, and there my dear friend, reaches beyond the imagination...great wealth....this is I believe, one of many of my favs of yours...smiles and hugs |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
D- These words weave beautifully to wrap ones heart in the gentle touch of silk itself - and bring a sigh of being caressed- lucky her -  SusanHappiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
DS You make shapes in water with your word songs....and they have many sides...all smooth as silk! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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J.Samm Member
since 2004-01-12
Posts 415Iloilo City, Philippines |
it's magical how words gain texture once spun skilfully...you weave silk well |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
very soft |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
oui, oui such lovely and seductive webs you weave with your words |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
The thrill of seduction moves through me in the vibration of these words. TD |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
DarkStranger~ The lovely murmur of the title bid me enter softly~ I danced among your word-thoughts, finding that they fit me well~ Thanking you from a heart that is full~  This IS a favorite ... and I *sigh*~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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