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Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

0 posted 2004-10-14 11:30 AM

Softly angled sunlight beams
diffuse themselves randomly
upon the edges of my dreams,
awakening me in poetic purr.

I reach with out stretched arms,
embrace the feel of your charms
caressing me seductively, gently
blending two souls into harmony.

Daylight breaks through a grayed mist,
blue haze fading into dandelion yellows
as the walls come alive with warmth of
lips smiling, remembering the feel of real.

Rolling out of bed, feet hitting the floor
I turn and whisper your name.
Suddenly the serene scene reverses,
as the chilling fog of reality sets in.

You are no longer here.

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

1 posted 2004-10-14 11:44 AM

sad times, but the poem, you wrote so very well...hugs lady

Mark Bohannan
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-21

Posts 7269
In the winds of Cherokee song

2 posted 2004-10-14 01:30 PM

Geez ... I hate it when that morning fog sets in. Been there too but enjoyed the write.

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

3 posted 2004-10-14 01:31 PM

This fog has visited me many times also Kacy. This is another beauty that I am keeping. Well done gal.

The greatest beauty on earth, is
found in the hearts of those
who love....

kayjay
Member Elite

since 2002-06-24

Posts 2015
Oregon

4 posted 2004-10-14 10:30 PM

How easily we slip into our dreams, until the brick wall of reality appears out of the fog. Well done! KJ

Through rubble and trouble and dark of night
The yawn of a dawn will hasten the light

J.Samm
Member

since 2004-01-12

Posts 415
Iloilo City, Philippines

5 posted 2004-10-14 10:50 PM

reality can indeed be a chilling fog...some other time it's a ray of light too...lovely write

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

6 posted 2004-10-14 10:56 PM

Oh, I was feeling sooo warm and fuzzy, and then somebody dumped a bucket of ice over my head - emotional change well expressed-

Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind.

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

7 posted 2004-10-16 03:22 PM

Ah, but somewhere between lives fantasy.
Wonderful purr.
TD

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