Open Poetry #33 |
Farewell to My Computer |
Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
My computer up and left me, I thought my heart would break. I lost a piece of my life And now I’m filled with ache. Its death was long and painful But the puter docs were lost, As to how it lasted a full five years ~ For it wasn’t worth its cost. It was born defective In its central drive, And it simply was amazing, That it still had been alive. It lived longer than expected. But, because its will was strong, It slugged it out to its last chip As it slowly crept along. I saved and saved and saved some more, Copying files to my disks. The data was important, And I wasn’t taking risks. The night it finally happened, I had written a poem on God. And I questioned how this could be, After my words of praise and laud? But in my heart I trusted, That if I prayed with all my might, A new computer would come my way, And all would turn out right. Well, the Universe provided, Me with a brand new computer, With all the bells and whistles ~ It’s truly super duper! I’m thrilled with my new companion. It’s the state of the art. But I thank the one that I just lost, And send it blessings from my heart. [This message has been edited by Earth Angel (10-14-2004 09:21 PM).] |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Oooh lucky you Linda! A new puter to write your wonderful poetry on. This makes me smile! Hugs~ ~Autumn..the year's last, loveliest smile.~ |
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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan |
Linda, “But I thank the one that I just lost, And send it blessings from my heart.” Sounds a little AC/PC to me (-: John |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
EA I remember a similar event...I'm glad you got a new one that makes you happy. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Imagine seeing Linda...reading this over the grave of IT...hmmmmm, perhaps.... Good one EA, know the feel of a shiny new sportscar in your house...sitting there, purring like a souped up kitten.... |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
ohhhhh, you did the right thing, Angel, by laying it to rest and giving it your blessing. It's just like you to do that. What fun, a new computer! Enjoy... K |
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kayjay Member Elite
since 2002-06-24
Posts 2015Oregon |
Computers give us fits Whene'er they're on the fritz. And when we curse those bits, They know we all are nits. Congrats on the new Mosheen!! Through rubble and trouble and dark of night |
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J.Samm Member
since 2004-01-12
Posts 415Iloilo City, Philippines |
awww, so sad...i know people say that we shouldn't be attached to material things but I believe things such as computers become essential parts of our lives...here in the Philippines people couldn't just live without their mobile phones...i also really felt bad when my mobile phone broke down...technology has become our friend |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Linda, you make even the mundane sould moving and happy ever after - you are a gift, my friend, of cheer and joy- Susan Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
yes always remembering the old , yet celebrating the new ... hey Linda I am so happy for you Hope |
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babygirlwlove Senior Member
since 2004-10-10
Posts 1180New York City |
lol...clever write! **babygirL** |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
I am your computer, your wish is my command But I am not infalliable, I hope you understand, Sometimes my files become corrupt, that's why I hope and pray, That you will back up the work you do, each and every day. And don't get mad at me, when things go awry, I can not think of everything, even though I try, Don't take me for granted and you will avoid despair, Just treat me like a loved one, with lots of love and care. ----------------------------------- "It's now how big it is, or how much pleasure it will bring, How long will it last, that's the most important thing." This quote I overheard, It was not made by me, It was made by our Earth Angel, Who was buying a new P.C. |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Well, I just reached over and hugged my computer to show my appreciation. (not weird is it?) Besides as I was once told by another poetess in here as she was tapping on the monitor screen ...... "There are people in there". Now this is a read I definitely needed this morning to start day. ohhhhh and one tiny little question if I may ... What happens to broken poets? |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Linda, this is precious and I'm glad you were able to save so many of your files. Good luck with your new one. It sounds awesome. huggles and giggles, Marti A single sunbeam is enough to drive away many shadows. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Nancy ~ Yes, indeedy! Lucky me! Mind you, I wasn't exactly saying that a couple of weeks ago! Happy autumnal hugs, Linda |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
John ~ lol That's a good one! Hi, John! Welcome abouard the PiP sailing ship! I look forward to having you sail these blue seas with us! Warm,welcoming hugs, EA |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Martie ~ Ah, so you do understand these feelings! But out of the darkness came a light ~ a new, super duper computer! Love & Light, Linda |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Agnus ~ Yes, Barry. That was exactly how it was ~ me reading my farewell poem over Millicent's grave and surrounded by all her family and friends ~ From cell phones and lap tops to scanners and printers. Tears of ink flowed like rain. But in their mutual sadness and respect for one of their own, they decided to open an office machines rental store where they can make money from renting out their bodies. They will use that money for a burial fund for office machines. Out of the darkness, came light! [This message has been edited by Earth Angel (10-16-2004 10:45 AM).] |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Kahlil ~ I knew you would understand. Loves 'n hugs, EA |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Kayjay ~ Thanks, KJ, for the poetic itzy bitz about my comuputer fritz! lol Love your computer and it will love you back! EA |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
J.Samm ~ I am such a techno fan. My cell phone is glued to my hip as well! Mind you, I may love all my techno toys, but I'm no techy! ~ altho', I try my best to get to know them and to learn what makes them tick! lol Love, Peace and technology! EA |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Sparkling Susan ~ That was very sweet of you to say! Thank you! Warm hugs and a big warm smile, Linda |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Hope ~ Exactomondo! ~ and thank you! Love from the Great White North to the Land Down Under, Linda |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
babygirl ~ Hi! It's good to have a new baby girl joining our poetic family! Thank your for reading and replying to my farewell poem. Warm, welcoming hugs, Earth Angel |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Toe the Puter Man ~ Well, bless my sweet vestments! Thank you for this keeper of a reply. You are one talented computer and are well worth lots of my love and care ~ and I will keep on saving and savoring your forever! With love and respect for all that you are ~ and do, Your Owner |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Mark ~ Love your computer and it will love you back. The hug you gave yours this morning is sure to add to the length of its life! Regarding your question, when a poet is broken, its computer will treat the poet as it had been treated. That a universal truth. Remember, "Do unto others as you would have them do unto you! To love, Light ~ and computers! lol Linda |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Good morning, Marti! I am enjoying getting to know my new computer. She's a beauty and I hope we have a long and mutually satisfying relationship! lol Loving hugs, Linda |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
You should have a nice long talk with Suthern about when to finally give up on a computer...... ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I was commiserating with your woes... then burst out laughing with Ratleader's response... Have you ever seen that commercial where they're trying to work on computers held together with duct tape? LOL I should be getting royalties from that idea! *G* |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Ratleader ~ I just read suthern's reply and I definitely can see what you mean! lol ~ Actually, having gone through the same thing, it really is not a laughing matter ~ but it's funny just the same! It was good to hear from you, Dear Leader! EA |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
suthern ~ No I haven't seen the commercial, but like you, I could have probably made even a more comical one! ~ at it would be comical to the viewers! ~ not us! lol I hope you ended up getting a new one like I just did. I am so very happy with it and all the wonderful programs that I am now able to install. Linda |
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