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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York 
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Forgotten heroes rambled sitars and drumbeats as you warmed my face today. I thought you had gone for good leaving me with your sister-moon-child and the grey damp of evening. I could smell you in the breeze. I smiled as each dying tress fell from your children, blanketing your body in a psychedelic bridal gown. How I would love to braid your hair just once, or hold your hand. But all I have of you is this day. |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Sheeesh, this is beautiful Sue. Maree  cuz fate is not just whose cooking smells good |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
About time this showed up! High Art... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
So very beautiful Sue! Hugs~ ~Autumn..the year's last, loveliest smile.~ |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
so good to read you again |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
wow *touching the screen* feeling this one in my heart |
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Greeneyes 
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
lovely this lovely you.... so touching Sue....  ~~*~~ |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
i've got the piano piece from the rolling stones 'she's like a rainbow' in my head now, thanks l@ve that song |
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brian sites Senior Member
since 2002-06-25
Posts 1475usa |
dont you just love this time of year? they are all good in their way... but fall.. has a clarity like this poem... nice |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
I smiled as each dying tress fell from your children, blanketing your body in a psychedelic bridal gown. How I would love to braid your hair just once, or hold your hand. But all I have of you is this day. feeling groovy.......... and i swear they wrapped me in their embrace this morning on the joggers track, whizzing around my head, crowning me once again, theleaf goddess......o autumn is magical, isnt it? |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
You write layers of meaning in simplicity. an awesome write, Susie Q!  |
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babygirlwlove Senior Member
since 2004-10-10
Posts 1180New York City |
serene and thoughtful write! **babygirL** |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Thank you Maree, coming from you, that means a lot to me. Ed, *smile* you sneak . . . thank you (taught by the best, I was) Thank you Nancy. Hey Dix, thank you. aww Kacy, *touching back* Thank you Thanks Lauren *smile* haha hey Raph, now I have that tune in me head sheesh Thank you Bri? yes and thank you Michele! That is a perfect name for you . . . the leaf goddess . . . thank you Hey Karen, I was taught by the best *wink* actually you taught me how to NOT be a writer. Thank you. Hey babygirl, coming from you, after reading your entrance - I am honored. Thank you Thanks guys. |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
A sweet read! *~coco~* |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
NICE READ |
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mysticpoe Senior Member
since 2003-02-28
Posts 883 |
Outstanding lw, a bit too personal for me to comment on. I'll just say OUTSTANDING!! you did an excellent job with this. wayne If nothing is something |
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kayjay Member Elite
since 2002-06-24
Posts 2015Oregon |
To some are given eyes to truly see what others do not, Sue. You are one such. It is always a pleasure to read your mind at work. Ken Through rubble and trouble and dark of night |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
This is so good to come home to... :hugs" |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Lovely lovely!! That's two...one for poem and one for you!  |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
I could smell you in the breeze. Huh? Wait! I took a shower, ok?? Seriously, I enjoyed the words of this poem...the yearn of it, the want. All so well described... |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
ahaha Barry . . . sniff? it isnt you . . . *smile* Thank you so much everyone, My God way too good to me (again) Twas' me ode to Mother Earth on an Autumn's Day. |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Opps missed it! I took this two ways actually Suzie, and loved my first image of those leaves on trees, laying at your feet, kinda worshipping ya, like we all tend to do yanno. Some game eh? 5 hours I sat riveted to it! |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
OMG so did I!!!! *laughing* My Yanks . . . *crying* ok ok so I was pullin for the Sox last nite, I really was and thank you Sharon for the above (goodness shush) |
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