Open Poetry #33 |
lone pine yen |
Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
footprint moon in a tiptoe sky where the voyeur wolf forgets his hidden and soughs his mate song the mist women ponder the shiver of virgins when they dance their sins at fireside confessionals where their fingers are sticks and the watchers wear glasses that hold the cold inside behind closed eyes and open their limbs like trees wanting rain and stevie sings gypsy to the man with marble gaze _____________ Dark scribblenote..lone pine is a little town in calif, up 395..mt whitney is there and and at night you can here the sky bringing winter to her..local indians speak of her often, how she has a big empty and needs many blizzards to sooth her soul. |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
there you are...I've grown fond of my morning fix of you...beatifully written, you feel nature unlike the rest of us...you commune with love...care...and tremendous change.... what would I do without your morning songs??? I don't want to know..hehehehe Morning Mr. Fixer Upper of hearts.... thank you for sharing |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
when lightening lights up the night you see your gypsy.... K |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Beautiful, Dark - soft breezes that touch here - Susan Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Ummmm...Lone Pine. I've been there. It's true, too, how the night speaks to it before cloaking it in dark... and how the sun shines her awakening... Another and a read like this is like cream in my coffee... a must have! |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
DS A beautiful place, Lone Pine...my first taste of mountain on the way to Mammoth. I always enjoy your colorful take on things, my friend. |
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