Open Poetry #33 |
Old Man House Song |
Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
Agate shores play soft shell music feet step light on holy ground eagle feather raven wing kingfisher cry o’er salmon Sound evergreens in mountain rain clouds water sings Lashootseed tongue black hair shiny canoe paddles honor elders totem song D’suq’wub my heart lives here in place of clear saltwater home Oh great leader friend of white man Chief Sealth can you hear my drum? |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
could anyone be more one with nature then you, this, your words...I found this very rich with promise, hope, an enjoyable feeling...magnificent write |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
mmmmmmmmmm ms kahlil..this was a treat to read...love the feel of it!! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Very very nice....yes, a keeper for sure! Hugs~ ~Autumn..the year's last, loveliest smile.~ |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Oh...this, definitely a Thank you, Kahlil... Karilea - if I whisper, will you listen? Keeping in mind, I must stand close... |
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