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soul drifter
Senior Member

since 2004-09-08

Posts 711
Colorado

0 posted 2004-10-13 05:02 AM

Smile Called Sunshine

Well I'm aware of a smile hidden inside me
warming the depths of my tranquil green sea
wrapping a coral heart with your love
so softly

Well I'm aware of a smile called sunshine
buzzing like summer inside my mind
beware of a love calling me backwards
here and now, lost in your hushed blue words
I just got to be

I've been nowhere I'd call anywhere
smiles faded to blue without care
eyes called moonlight wet with night
vieled with cloudy feelings
straight out of me

Are you aware of your smile called sunshine
curling and illuminating in my mind
are you there, inventing love for me again
here and now, wading through your blue rain
I just got to be

A smile called sunshine
painted on a face I call fine
a spring blush named you
wrapping a coral heart with my love
tapping a bone grey dawn, my love
sapping an egg white wind, my love

"Poets are all who love, who feel great truths, and tell them; and the truth of truths is love." --Philip James Bailey

Sunshine

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Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2004-10-13 06:08 AM

tapping a bone grey dawn, my love
sapping an egg white wind, my love

~*~

Now, those are surely

lines...

I enjoyed this very much. I hope your love does, too!

MGROVES

Member Elite

since 2004-02-01

Posts 3802
california

2 posted 2004-10-13 06:47 AM

i too enjoyed this

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

3 posted 2004-10-13 09:47 AM

A smile called sunshine
painted on a face I call fine
a spring blush named you
wrapping a coral heart with my love
tapping a bone grey dawn, my love
sapping an egg white wind, my love

tremendous visuals of a lovely woman!

quatro
Member

since 2003-04-29

Posts 392
Galveston, Texas

4 posted 2004-10-13 03:17 PM

This is a wonderful poem. I like the way the words roll off the tongue. Nice images also.

quatro

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

5 posted 2004-10-13 03:23 PM

"wrapping a coral heart with my love
tapping a bone grey dawn, my love
sapping an egg white wind, my love"

Beautiful beautiful!!!!!!!!
Hugs~

~Autumn..the year's last, loveliest smile.~

Martie

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Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

6 posted 2004-10-13 03:25 PM

Sweet!

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