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Open Poetry #33

consumed

jennirey
Member

since 2002-01-24

Posts 198
North Richland HillsTx

0 posted 2004-10-12 10:44 AM

My Muse is whispering loudly through the leaves this morning.
I close my eyes and let the sapphire clouded memories of you take seed.
Driving to work today, I watched the Sun rising.
An orange blob in its entire half moon splendor,
I squinted and thought of it as more of an annoyance.
This is how I feel about the clouded memories I have of you.
I can only see the blinding capabilities you hold over me.
I have to squint to remind myself of where I am going. .
If I nurture this seed that is once again growing in my brain,
Will I once again become consumed?

Dark Angel
Member Patricius

since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

1 posted 2004-10-12 04:42 PM

I squinted and thought of it as more of an annoyance.
This is how I feel about the clouded memories I have of you.

Hey Jennirey, Enjoyed this very much.... the lines above especially spoke to me.

cuz fate is not just whose cooking smells good
but which way the wind blows

~ani difranco~

quatro
Member

since 2003-04-29

Posts 392
Galveston, Texas

2 posted 2004-10-13 03:22 PM

Cool write! Muses are that way sometimes.

I like these lines the best.

quatro

"Driving to work today, I watched the Sun rising.
An orange blob in its entire half moon splendor,
I squinted and thought of it as more of an annoyance.
This is how I feel about the clouded memories I have of you."

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