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Don_Juan
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since 2004-04-08
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Far from where I am going

0 posted 2004-10-11 10:46 PM



Funk slap bass
stringin' out
among imaginary streets
pulsing beat of a
alternating strumming guitar
blast through the kick
a growve across the ride
plays out a theme
of the nocturnal crowd
hues of blue and violet
mesh and assimilate
into intoxicating scenery
street light fight
breaks down to dance
seering keyboards
chords of preservation
shadows step in time
moon light plays gently
across dimly lit buildings
pulse and be released
music of nightlife

nice use of muffin

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JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
1 posted 2004-10-11 10:48 PM


Enjoyed...James
Kahlil
Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881

2 posted 2004-10-12 09:26 AM


Oh, I was there, too...we must have seen each other.  
Enjoyed the funky picture.

K

babygirlwlove
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since 2004-10-10
Posts 1180
New York City
3 posted 2004-10-12 10:36 AM


and there it is again...those brass rhythms...lovely stuff...

**babygirL**

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