late-night self-questioning

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Skyfire

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since 2000-12-27

Posts 3381
Riding

0 posted 2004-10-11 02:44 PM

Is it bad
that I don't think
about you?

Is it too fast
for me to be
over you?

Is it okay
that I don't
miss us?

I thought I loved you

but maybe
towards the end
I didn't.

Should I be sorry?

and then He created the horse...

Gentle Spirit
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since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

1 posted 2004-10-11 02:46 PM

Rhonda, you shouldn't be sorry if you know it was over. You should be glad that you realized it. Well thought out questions.

Susan
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since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

2 posted 2004-10-11 02:53 PM

Ah, the answer is in the the questions themselves - if you must question why you don't feel, then it is good you are out -

Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind.

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

3 posted 2004-10-11 03:41 PM

Perhaps you realized in time..that happens.
Don't feel sorry your feelings aren't as strong as you thought they would be.
Hugs~

~Autumn..the year's last, loveliest smile.~

Dark Angel
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since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

4 posted 2004-10-11 05:00 PM

I'm with Gentle spirit on this one. *smile*

Enjoyed.

cuz fate is not just whose cooking smells good
but which way the wind blows

~ani difranco~

Pilgrimage
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since 2001-12-04

Posts 3945
Texas, USA

5 posted 2004-10-11 05:09 PM

This is a quiet and gentle read, with an indefinable sadness. Well done.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

6 posted 2004-10-11 07:17 PM

everything changes...and that's okay

Larry C

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since 2001-09-10

Posts 10286
United States

7 posted 2004-10-11 09:49 PM

In the end you can let go because you have healed. No guilt required. Optional, but not required. Good write.

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

8 posted 2004-10-11 10:13 PM

better to realize now....all the wiser.....hugssss

~~*~~
Read between the lines
look deep into each word
and you will understand the
depth of my soul (GE)
~~**~~

skyshine

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since 2002-02-07

Posts 3058
Beneath the northern stars

9 posted 2004-10-14 03:00 PM

Some good things to think about....hope all is well

~sky

So you go and make it happen
Do your best, just keep on laughing
It's all on you, there's always a brand new day. -Avril Lavigne

Marshalzu

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since 2001-02-15

Posts 2681
Lurking

10 posted 2004-10-14 03:28 PM

Great writing Rhonda.

Andrew

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