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Dr.Moose1
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0 posted 2004-10-12 09:31 PM


Of messages italicized on bill-board skies of blue,
unfettered as lone flocks arise to heed migrations call.
Stark lettering says Summer's past, reluctantly, it's true,
we face yet one more cycle of the coming of the fall.

Through graphic use of color might some secret be revealed,
when story of the sunset's captured in reflective light?
A world transposed from heavens to the woodlands and the fields,
to underscore the message as repeated by those sights.

The language of the seasons form such thoughts that you might hear,
what clues have been imparted to the Earth and all it's ken,
in passing of the days until such time shall re-appear
life-force to be re-newed and give us breath to live again.

I raise my eyes in wonder, has a message thus, been sent,
or, is this too, illusion, of my own "Bewilderment"?


© Copyright 2004 William E.Kleist - All Rights Reserved
Martie
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1 posted 2004-10-12 09:49 PM


Doc

"I raise my eyes in wonder, has a message thus, been sent,
or, is this too, illusion, of my own "Bewilderment"?"

The changing makes us question
our own movement in time
and that is good to do it seems
hey can't believe I rhymed!




Gentle Spirit
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2 posted 2004-10-13 08:32 AM


This is beautiful writing Doc. I enjoyed this very much!

The greatest beauty on earth, is
found in the hearts of those
who love....

LeeJ
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3 posted 2004-10-13 08:35 AM


to underscore the message as repeated by those sights.


A masterpiece...of loveliness and a certain respect for whatever comes shows up strong in this...thank you

Dr.Moose1
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4 posted 2004-10-14 04:55 PM


Martie,
Thanks. Just wondering out loud.
Doc
Gentle Spirit,
Thank you. I'm glad you think so, and enjoyed.
Doc

Lee J,
Thanks. I do have a great respect for the workings Nature.
Doc

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