Open Poetry #33 |
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A Question of Seasons |
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Dr.Moose1 Member Elite
since 1999-09-05
Posts 3448Bewilderment , USA |
Of messages italicized on bill-board skies of blue, unfettered as lone flocks arise to heed migrations call. Stark lettering says Summer's past, reluctantly, it's true, we face yet one more cycle of the coming of the fall. Through graphic use of color might some secret be revealed, when story of the sunset's captured in reflective light? A world transposed from heavens to the woodlands and the fields, to underscore the message as repeated by those sights. The language of the seasons form such thoughts that you might hear, what clues have been imparted to the Earth and all it's ken, in passing of the days until such time shall re-appear life-force to be re-newed and give us breath to live again. I raise my eyes in wonder, has a message thus, been sent, or, is this too, illusion, of my own "Bewilderment"? |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Doc "I raise my eyes in wonder, has a message thus, been sent, or, is this too, illusion, of my own "Bewilderment"?" The changing makes us question our own movement in time and that is good to do it seems hey can't believe I rhymed! ![]() |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
This is beautiful writing Doc. I enjoyed this very much! The greatest beauty on earth, is |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
to underscore the message as repeated by those sights. A masterpiece...of loveliness and a certain respect for whatever comes shows up strong in this...thank you |
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Dr.Moose1 Member Elite
since 1999-09-05
Posts 3448Bewilderment , USA |
Martie, Thanks. Just wondering out loud. Doc Gentle Spirit, Thank you. I'm glad you think so, and enjoyed. Doc Lee J, Thanks. I do have a great respect for the workings Nature. Doc |
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