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aujussy wolf
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0 posted 2004-10-10 09:12 PM



leaning in the doorway
diamond looks in your eye
turning off the spotlight
and returning with a candle
from time to time
I see you again
in the back of my thoughts
whispering about the night
and her star galaxy
forgotten friends and there special ways  
reappear in the end
you were the host then
and i was an answer to your troubles
so many talks that flew away
the love and emotion that followed you home
just say my name again
one last word from your lips
heaven sent gifts
hard to resist
a delicate yes and no
    
  

      
      
JDWIII
10-10-2004


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Susan
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1 posted 2004-10-10 10:20 PM


this gives me warm fuzzy feelings of gifting time and an ear, of lending heart -

Susan

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2 posted 2004-10-10 10:32 PM


S,
warm fuzzys lol
~wolfy

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3 posted 2004-10-10 11:03 PM


"just say my name again
one last word from your lips
heaven sent gifts
hard to resist
a delicate yes and no "

ooooo...niiice...smooth stuff..

**babygirL**

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4 posted 2004-10-10 11:15 PM


babyg , welcome to pip
like your name babe .....
and thanks for the props
~wolf

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5 posted 2004-10-10 11:20 PM


..."whispering about the night, and her star galaxy"...

The Aurora...of love...

Pretty awesome.
TD

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6 posted 2004-10-10 11:34 PM


the aurora of love would be great
a lone wolf can only be alone for
so long ....lol
thanx a ton td
~wolfy

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7 posted 2004-10-11 04:40 PM


you were the host then
and i was an answer to your troubles


reminding me of Dylan here, James

Warmed me up on this cold day . . .

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8 posted 2004-10-11 10:19 PM


just say my name again
one last word from your lips
heaven sent gifts
hard to resist
a delicate yes and no ''''
WOW--hugsssss you

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look deep into each word
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depth of my soul (GE)
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9 posted 2004-10-12 10:46 PM


i love hugs !!!!
lol

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