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serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02

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0 posted 2004-10-10 02:36 AM

"Did you think that this was over?
Did you think the subject dread?
Just as your eyes crossed the border
as the living...checked the dead?"

Leaping trophied memories - she stayed--
blister flesh in longing for the grave.
Stomping twigs of malcontent, she prayed,
weaving toe tags greenery, she gave:

"It's all reality."

[This message has been edited by serenity blaze (10-10-2004 05:23 AM).]

CocoBaci
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since 2000-05-06

Posts 3043

1 posted 2004-10-10 05:04 AM

..."Stomping twigs of malcontent, she prayed"...

It's a treat to come back thru here to read your poetry!
*~coco~*

Dark Angel
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since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

2 posted 2004-10-10 06:58 AM

Stomping twigs of malcontent, she prayed

WOW!

M'lady Karen, this makes me want to stomp my feet along with ya baby.

Love it, love you.

Mxx

cuz fate is not just whose cooking smells good
but which way the wind blows

~ani difranco~

Susan Caldwell
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since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

3 posted 2004-10-10 08:49 AM

"blister flesh in longing for the grave."

yep..what she said.

reality bites sometimes.

"cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind"
~Sarah McLachlan~

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

4 posted 2004-10-10 09:22 AM

"Stomping twigs of malcontent"

Yup, what she said.

Love ya lady~

~Autumn..the year's last, loveliest smile.~

Susan
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since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

5 posted 2004-10-10 10:29 AM

whew - shivers.

Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind.

vandana

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since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

6 posted 2004-10-10 10:41 AM

enjoyed

ThisDiamond
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since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

7 posted 2004-10-10 08:00 PM

Sister Serenity...
You do have a way with words!

Oh, what a picture painted itself before me...
A gem of a write...Keeper.
TD

Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

8 posted 2004-10-10 09:25 PM

you always do have a way
of putting edges on candy
enjoyed this one serene one

Skyfire

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since 2000-12-27

Posts 3381
Riding

9 posted 2004-10-10 11:31 PM

once again... wow!

and then He created the horse...

Gentle Spirit
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since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

10 posted 2004-10-11 01:48 PM

Stomping twigs of malcontent, she prayed,
weaving toe tags greenery, she gave:

"It's all reality."

adding my WOW to the above WOW'S!!

wranx
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since 2002-06-07

Posts 3689
Moved from a shack to a barn

11 posted 2004-10-11 03:17 PM

And here I am thinking "It's ALL fiction"

Hugs, you

littlewing
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since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

12 posted 2004-10-11 04:36 PM

*laughing at Ed*

it isnt?

OMGGGG

*grin*

K, you always make me see it how it is . . .

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

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displaced

13 posted 2004-10-11 06:38 PM

awesome!

Greeneyes

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In Your Poetic Mind

14 posted 2004-10-11 10:17 PM

you have such a simple truth about you....it's so refreshing......

~~*~~
Read between the lines
look deep into each word
and you will understand the
depth of my soul (GE)
~~**~~

Aenimal
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since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

15 posted 2004-10-11 10:22 PM

i'm inclined to agree with ed, but then im in a pissy mood today..

lava your words as always

brian sites
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since 2002-06-25

Posts 1475
usa

16 posted 2004-10-11 10:32 PM

carved in stone....

damn

jagged power

you are awesome

Sunshine

Administrator

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since 1999-06-25

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Listening to every heart

17 posted 2004-10-11 10:51 PM

ecrivan
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Posts 3923
my own state

18 posted 2004-10-11 11:19 PM

enjoyed the read

Martie

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California

19 posted 2004-10-11 11:42 PM

You are amazing, as always!

serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

20 posted 2004-10-12 04:48 PM

I realize this may be hard to believe, but I seldom know what to say in return for such kindness, so I'll just take the advice of my Dad and say "thank you" and shaddup.

grin

Don't think that he meant for me to type a speech tho, huh?

Love you all.

Shadding up now.

Ratleader

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Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass

21 posted 2004-10-12 10:27 PM

Dunno whether to shout "Wow!" or "Ow!"... maybe some of both! This one hits hard....

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