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aujussy wolf
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0 posted 2004-10-10 01:35 PM



With you now the winter seems warmer
holding you close in the night
we dream together
can this be so real
I am glad to be a part of this
the whole mass conclusion

What street are they on
acting something like the originals
the bond is strong and true
remembering the pictures we took
and the last day on the bay

Passing time without you
the music stopped playing
looking all over for you
wondering the possibility


......

JDWIII
November 1998

© Copyright 2004 James D Wolf III - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2004-10-10 01:37 PM


I got here just in time to catch your trilogy...
A strong opening...and ohhhh...the possibilities!

TD

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2 posted 2004-10-10 01:53 PM


This is beautiful....love it!!
Hugs~

~Autumn..the year's last, loveliest smile.~

aujussy wolf
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3 posted 2004-10-10 02:02 PM


TD, possibilities are endless lol
this was from winter of 98 ...many moons past and many hearts ago ....thanks for the
props....,
Hugs and hugs lol

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Enchantress Hugs back babe , love that you liked it
i have been digging up some of my older writes ...they date back to about 93- 94
thats when i started really putting my thoughts and feelings on paper
wow so many words ago lol
thanks for the hug too
- wolfy

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4 posted 2004-10-10 08:27 PM


sigh.....

cant wait for the other parts, you will be posting them right?

~~*~~
Read between the lines
look deep into each word
and you will understand the
depth of my soul (GE)
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5 posted 2004-10-10 08:38 PM


well thats it for the looking glass
because it was written so long ago ( 98 )
i think it should be left right where it
is today but there will be more
, lol more up to date ....
....thanks L , for the reply
hugs ~w

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6 posted 2004-10-11 07:52 PM


so enjoyed
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7 posted 2004-10-12 08:55 AM


what a lucky woman, James
This is beautiful.

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8 posted 2004-10-12 08:59 AM


this pulls you into an embrace...lovely..

**babygirL**

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9 posted 2004-10-12 10:55 PM


passing shads , thanks sweets

little w , lol ..that made me smile , but the girl in this poem is gone ...moved on
down the road ....lol , thanks lwing : ) for making me feel betta

and babygirl ....
I dont mind if i do embrace you lol
jus kiddin  ... thanks babe

latta ~wolfy

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