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1slick_lady
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since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2004-07-09 02:33 AM

A New Season Comes

in this heat
I feel the sweater weather
it is coming soon
with the silver wind
and the curl of leaves dried
I am preparing this time
having the stock ready
and things from harvest stored
life has changed
to where a fire will burn
to chase the damp away
for the world has turned
and I will be in
a different place
when a new season comes

"be prepared to bleed" Joni Mitchell

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

1 posted 2004-07-09 03:39 AM

best to be prepared yes

Kahlil
Senior Member

since 2003-04-12

Posts 1881

2 posted 2004-07-09 09:23 AM

Life has changed, lady,
and you know what to do...
this time.

~K~

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

3 posted 2004-07-09 10:01 AM

Life changes us as well, Lady, this is one sound peace....thank you

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

4 posted 2004-07-09 10:22 AM

1slick_lady
Enjoyed the read.

Susan
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since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

5 posted 2004-07-09 11:35 AM

I like the feel of this, it breathes of change.

Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind.

CocoBaci
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since 2000-05-06

Posts 3043

6 posted 2004-10-10 05:32 AM

Enjoyed the read PoetFriend1SLick
*~coco~*

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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since 2000-01-29

Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia

7 posted 2004-10-10 05:39 AM

enjoyed the read Bella!
Roniece Dawson-Bruce

ctowen
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since 2001-10-18

Posts 2286
Green Mountains of VT

8 posted 2004-10-10 08:55 AM

Very well done, short and sweet.

Acceptance is the first step of preparation.

Send some of your smiling sun this way please!!

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

9 posted 2004-10-10 10:09 AM

OneSlick~
Uh huh ... I have known this season too~
And with it ... changes dawned anew
Each more lovely than the past
Each now etched to foreverly last~

You are a lovely word-presenter, my poetess~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

Email noles1@totcon.com

vandana

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since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

10 posted 2004-10-10 10:44 AM

liked this one

Huan Yi
Member Ascendant

since 2004-10-12

Posts 6688
Waukegan

11 posted 2004-10-12 11:31 PM

A New Season Comes

in this heat
I feel the sweater weather
it is coming soon

with the silver wind
and the curl of leaves dried
I am preparing this time

having the stock ready
and things from harvest stored
life has changed

to where a fire will burn
to chase the damp away
for the world has turned

and I will be in
a different place
when a new season comes
……………………….

Helen,

This is very good.

John

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