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VAS
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450
Oregon

0 posted 2004-10-10 01:28 PM


Written while listening to a live performance of Hovhaness' "Mysterious Mountain (Symphony #2)

Upon this Mysterious Mountain

to walk the stream’s banks
one summer morn
butters and dragons
flit in carousels
above rubeckia,
ox-eye daisies
and sand hills
stroked with high water’s fingers
rain swells’ hands
finger-painting
nature’s rhythms
across the land
and you––
you walk here, too,
if but in my heart,
in my soul,
within my spirit,
holding me steadfast
with your love
your profound
enduring love
that both brings
these tears
weeping with joy and sorrow
and in the while dries them
with the serenity, the peace
your love brings, even now,
in these latter days beyond
the reach of your hands
yes, you are gone,
yet your love sustains,
strengthens, and creates
a vibrance in me,
a mystery that understanding
cannot claim
a return to
serenity that bathes
with peace

©October 9, 2004

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

[This message has been edited by VAS (10-10-2004 03:57 PM).]

© Copyright 2004 Virginia Salter - All Rights Reserved
ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353
Michigan, USA
1 posted 2004-10-10 01:39 PM


You have managed to capture what I have been trying to write!

Breathless Applause!  Outstanding write V.
TD

Enchantress
Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113
Canada eh.
2 posted 2004-10-10 01:47 PM


Absolutely breathtaking Virginia!
Hugs~

~Autumn..the year's last, loveliest smile.~

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