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Snow
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desert flower looking for rain

0 posted 2004-10-09 01:46 PM



"yet each man kills the thing he loves
by each let this be heard,
some do it with a bitter look,
some with a flattering word"
oscar wilde

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passing shadows
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1 posted 2004-10-09 01:53 PM


very intense...powerful...and sadly beautiful
Kahlil
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2 posted 2004-10-09 03:14 PM


Snow:
Bravo to you for finding the words to describe this...

K

dgvarner
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3 posted 2004-10-09 04:35 PM


Deep emotions here...

well written!

hugs, g

"Everybody just wants to get high...sit and watch a perfect world go by..." (T.McGraw)

Robert Joseph
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4 posted 2004-10-09 05:44 PM


Applause...and more!

      Robert Joseph

Dark Angel
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5 posted 2004-10-09 06:18 PM


I love your work!

cuz fate is not just whose cooking smells good
but which way the wind blows

~ani difranco~

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6 posted 2004-10-09 10:01 PM


I like this...but love the other one better. Bravo honey!

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klm
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7 posted 2004-10-10 01:01 AM


understanding...and more.

kenneth lane

The true poet writes to express, not impress.

ctowen
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8 posted 2004-10-10 09:00 AM


A beautiful sliver of you,
         well presented and written.


             I could feel the release of my own breath ...


      cto

froggy
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9 posted 2004-10-10 11:16 AM


I like this.
Know a couple people this fits.

:-)

Mark Bohannan
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In the winds of Cherokee song
10 posted 2004-10-10 12:58 PM


Very intense and wonderful.  Love the descript ... "glass naked" ... that is a great poetic phrasing.
aujussy wolf
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11 posted 2004-10-10 01:54 PM


wild one
sharp with truth

.....
hugs hugs hugs .,
wolfy

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