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Open Poetry #33
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Thomas J. Allie
Junior Member
since 2003-06-13
Posts 11
NY USA
0 posted 2004-10-09 06:35 PM


Is life really made by us.
Do we truley choose are own destiny?
Is it are choice what we end up as?
Do we decide are destiny?
Who knows are life may or may not choosen by by us but life is lived and how ever it goes just live it.

By Thomas Allie
© Copyright 2004 Thomas J. Allie - All Rights Reserved
Margherita
Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
1 posted 2004-10-09 06:41 PM


We are here with a purpose I think .... and yes I definitely believe we have always the choice.

Thank you for your thought provoking piece.

Love, Margherita
Dark Angel
Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095
2 posted 2004-10-09 09:36 PM

I think we have a hand in it Life is like a bag of lucky door prizes.

should the word "are" in lines 2, 3 and 4 be "our".

cuz fate is not just whose cooking smells good
but which way the wind blows

~ani difranco~

passing shadows
Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
3 posted 2004-10-09 10:43 PM

destiny or choice? the age-old question
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