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Mistletoe Angel
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0 posted 2004-07-08 03:12 PM


(Re-posted from The Corner Pub to sate the hopeless summer romantic's vagary! )



Azalea Glade
By: Noah Eaton
9/26/03

Your blush has won me
Discovering my fragile passion
I make this constitutional
Deep within the calico of your womanhood
Skulking in forests of strawberry ice
Within the purple satin of this azalea glade…

White lightning cradled over the river
Where the fawn drinks of jasmine wine
Stamens of tangelo tie-dye the mother-of-pearl sky
Scarlet pistil, make the dawn come alive
Honeymoon honey never tasted so sweet
Plumleaf desserts shared in this azalea glade…

Little Macanthra, your cheeks of bing cherry cherubs
Sakuragata smiles, pink pancake fantasies
Little pitchers filled with honeydew juice
Bee-dazzlers napping under rose-shell parasols
Peachy keen children, with lemon drop freckles
Mandarin light belly buttons, and orchid lollipop grins
Tossing starfish beachballs in this azalea glade…

Beyond a pleasant creek of buttermilk rouge
This Satsuki festival lasts more than a month
Coral bells chiming crystal wine-glass serenades
The Carmine Queen and the cherry-blossom maharajah
All-a-glow with the royalty in this tussah silk kingdom
Come, dear magical maiden, and I shall take you there
Beyond the poppyseed trail of this azalea glade…








"You'll find something that's enough to keep you
But if the bright lights don't receive you
You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20

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1 posted 2004-07-08 05:00 PM


Noah, I am so pleased that you posted this beautiful extravaganza here. I missed it when it was posted in The Corner Pub.

So delightfully rich in images! They dazzled my senses! B-E-A-U-T-I-F-U-L

You know how much I enjoy reading this aspect of your talent!

Love & Light,
Linda

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2 posted 2004-07-08 08:19 PM


Mmmmm, Azalea's, most beautiful, as is this.  Like dancing amongst wind strewn petals in the warm kiss of the setting sun.

  Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you.  Joy is a state of mind.

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3 posted 2004-07-08 09:10 PM


Noah

Your imagery is a garden of earthly delight..I want to walk in that glade!  

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4 posted 2004-07-08 09:43 PM


Noah!!  So pleased to read your words again..
And this is beautiful!
A place of tranquility and splendor.
Hugs to my sidekick!!

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
Dancing with you in the summer rain ~

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5 posted 2004-07-08 11:20 PM


I am breathless. That was so romantic.

Cold hands means a warm heart

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6 posted 2004-07-09 02:59 PM


beautiful poem Noah. I enjoyed reading it
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7 posted 2004-07-09 04:14 PM


A feast for the eyes and soul Noah. Thankyou for this. hugs, Chris

   Life itself is the most wonderful fairy tale.
                                          Hans Christian Anderson

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8 posted 2004-07-10 12:05 PM


Noah, my friend. It's so good to see you!!
And, this is a beautiful poem. I love the
pictures, too.
Hugs,
Ethel

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9 posted 2004-07-10 10:26 PM


Enjoyed Noah....James
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10 posted 2004-10-10 05:38 AM


Beautiful
I very much enjoyed this read...
*~coco~*

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11 posted 2004-10-10 05:41 AM


Noah, this is simply beautiful and beautifully stunning!
Enjoyed Bello
Roniece Dawson-Bruce

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