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If You Knew
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If You Knew |
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James_A_Fraser Senior Member
since 2003-09-03
Posts 972Out Making Anticlines |
If You Knew if you knew... if I somehow found a way.... somehow.... if only I could or if I dared.... I can almost see... almost see your eyes the play of color in them then.... almost feel the draw of new expression building in my face one I’ve never felt.... as I tried to say.... and as you realized... if you knew how very much.... how my heart pulls toward you no matter where you are.... if I could find a way to say, to show.... to make you feel.... life then so perfect so wonderous so different..... ....if you knew |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
if people would only know instead of pretending to..if we could all be sincere, we wouldn't be here...good write though  |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
good write! |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Hi Jamie I'm thinking this is about a relationship that hasn't spoken yet. Just the thought of what could be and how it would change everything, exists. Well done!  |
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Copperbell Senior Member
since 2003-11-08
Posts 956 |
I hope you let her know |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
Wow!! lucky girl I hope you get to show her this write - it is beautiful and perfect! Roniece Dawson-Bruce |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
almost feel the draw of new expression building in my face one I’ve never felt.... as I tried to say.... and as you realized... if you knew how very much.... how my heart pulls toward you no matter where you are.... if I could find a way to say, to show.... to make you feel.... If her heart is listening, she knows. *S* This is absolutely beautiful, my friend. *S* |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
So tell her already! *smiling here* Oh, if you only knew... |
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babygirlwlove Senior Member
since 2004-10-10
Posts 1180New York City |
oooo what lovely angst and longing...feeling you...in the fingertips... **babygirL** |
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