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James_A_Fraser
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since 2003-09-03

Posts 972
Out Making Anticlines

0 posted 2004-10-08 07:00 PM

Being Wind

“Sometimes you are the wind,”
you told me once, and so I wish;
I want the things the wind wants,
to do the things the wind does.

I want to ruffle your hair,
tease up your skirt a bit...
to press my lips and blow
a warm spot just...there...
and there....and later, there...
I want to turn your cheeks
all pink and bring you things,
sand, feathers, dandelion seeds
like singular snowflakes....

And I want, so want to blow
myself out to wherever you are,
I mean any time, anywhere,
anywhere at all....

Martie

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since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

1 posted 2004-10-08 10:12 PM

Jamie

To be the wind...I would like that too! I love the idea.

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
Member Ascendant

since 2000-01-29

Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia

2 posted 2004-10-09 01:28 AM

this is a lovely write - oh how lucky is the wind!

Roniece Dawson-Bruce

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2004-10-09 03:45 AM

awesome write!

Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

4 posted 2004-10-09 07:01 AM

I want to turn your cheeks
all pink and bring you things,
sand, feathers, dandelion seeds
like singular snowflakes....

And I want, so want to blow
myself out to wherever you are,
I mean any time, anywhere,
anywhere at all....

================================

very very cool write of theme....
this is one of those poems that makes the reader say iwishihadwrotethis!!

I would love to live as a river flows, carried by the surprise of its own unfolding.

~Fluent~
John O'Donohue

Dark Angel
Member Patricius

since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

5 posted 2004-10-09 10:50 AM

I want to turn your cheeks
all pink and bring you things,
sand, feathers, dandelion seeds
like singular snowflakes....

And I want, so want to blow
myself out to wherever you are,
I mean any time, anywhere,
anywhere at all....
Yup Janet Marie is right, this is one of those "IWIHWT" poems.

Wonderful work James.

it's a

Maree

cuz fate is not just whose cooking smells good
but which way the wind blows

~ani difranco~

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

6 posted 2004-10-09 10:54 AM

This is wonderful - stirring, like the wind.

Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind.

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

7 posted 2004-10-09 01:52 PM

Jaime~
You blow soft poetic thoughts mt way~

I feel the winded breath of you circling~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

8 posted 2004-10-12 10:19 AM

I want to ruffle your hair,
tease up your skirt a bit...
to press my lips and blow
a warm spot just...there...
and there....and later, there...
I want to turn your cheeks
all pink and bring you things,
sand, feathers, dandelion seeds
like singular snowflakes....

And I want, so want to blow
myself out to wherever you are,
I mean any time, anywhere,
anywhere at all....

You write love with such exquisite tenderness. *S* Beautiful work!

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

9 posted 2004-10-12 10:29 AM

Such a soft, yearning bit of wind...
I, too, wish I had written this...

babygirlwlove
Senior Member

since 2004-10-10

Posts 1180
New York City

10 posted 2004-10-12 10:30 AM

teasing and lighthearted...lovely..

**babygirL**

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