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Open Poetry #33

tanka

Pilgrimage
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since 2001-12-04

Posts 3945
Texas, USA

0 posted 2004-10-11 05:08 PM

As I fade away
I hope my blossoms linger
in a summer scent

that rides on Autumn breezes.
Remember me in Winter.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

[This message has been edited by Pilgrimage (10-11-2004 05:50 PM).]

babygirlwlove
Senior Member

since 2004-10-10

Posts 1180
New York City

1 posted 2004-10-11 05:37 PM

lovely movement in this...

**babygirL**

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

2 posted 2004-10-11 05:49 PM

OhMyGoodnessNan~
This is positively GORGEOUS !!!
I simply love it~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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Pilgrimage
Member Elite

since 2001-12-04

Posts 3945
Texas, USA

3 posted 2004-10-11 05:52 PM

babygirl and Marge-thanks guys. I just scribbled it down. Probably should have taken some time for revision, but it felt good.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

4 posted 2004-10-11 07:01 PM

nicely done

Pilgrimage
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since 2001-12-04

Posts 3945
Texas, USA

5 posted 2004-10-12 09:51 AM

Thanks, Shadows! I appreciate it.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

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