Open Poetry #33 |
What Could Be |
nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
What Could Be tried to find that medium where eyes would dance upon sight and warmth would enter and open up doors even in silence but it was always those empty moments always the stepping back then the feel of soft lips disappeared the fall of words never touched the waiting skin and the day would drag on ...wishing when "if onlys" turned to moist eyes and words could never seem to explain so there will be the gray again with no crossing over and there will be no smiles to someday see for distance grows when no hands reach out and hearts betray what lies beneath there will be an "always" locked inside for I carry your pain of never knowing~ what could be (love) between the lines. |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
may not be what your looking for but I'm standing here with my hand extended to you...I've got pretty large shoulders and great big ears...certainly not like the comfort of a man's love forevermore...but, sometimes friends fill in the gaps bringing light to the darkness... bittersweet write.... hugs Lee J. |
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bslicker
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
good write M hugs (((((((M))))) bernie A smile a day keeps the world in smile's. |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Yes, well said! Love is never between the lines - lines are merely make believe and wishing what could be. Only touch can say it all, do it all, and be it all. Without that, there isn't anything really worth having in the long run. Perhaps if your wonderful writing skills were turned outward to the world you may see more wonder in this thing called life and we in turn would see it too through your gift of words. All said kindly but I don't know how to indicate that here. |
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eor Senior Member
since 2002-09-26
Posts 959blues & greys |
very heartfelt, enjoyed reading this Awake through motion with curiosity to curtain your first move |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
oh poet sister....I so understand |
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