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Decaflame
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since 2001-05-11
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0 posted 2004-07-13 11:12 AM


In Steal of Keeping

If I do not tell you

Then how would you ever know

That the stolen moments, when
You leave a note,
Plant a kiss,
Whisper

Words

I
Do

I do, too,

Or when you do say,

I love you ~

That, that

Is what keeps me.

And I smile in your smile,
Wearing your eyes
Knowing that

You hear me,

in a stolen moment

Singing…



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LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296

1 posted 2004-07-13 11:16 AM


And I smile in your smile,
Wearing your eyes
Knowing that

You hear me,

in a stolen moment

Singing…


absolutely beautiful!!!!!

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113
Canada eh.
2 posted 2004-07-13 11:20 AM


"And I smile in your smile,
Wearing your eyes
Knowing that

You hear me,

in a stolen moment

Singing…"

If I may quote another pip member..
gleeeee
Love this Deca!!

VAS
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Posts 7450
Oregon
3 posted 2004-07-13 11:28 AM


superbly tender

superbly rendered

some truly fantastic lines, start to finish


That's Amoré!

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

Earth Angel
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Realms of Light
4 posted 2004-07-13 11:43 AM


My heart's smiling... I do so enjoy your poetry on love's passions!


EA

passing shadows
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displaced
5 posted 2004-07-13 12:33 PM


this is wonderful
miscellanea
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since 2004-06-24
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OH
6 posted 2004-08-31 01:04 PM


Loved this from the title on!  Wow!  a keeper

          miscellanea

nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
7 posted 2004-08-31 01:29 PM


that is how it should be...


M

Margherita
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Eternity
8 posted 2004-08-31 01:33 PM


And I smile in your smile,
Wearing your eyes
Knowing that

You hear me,

in a stolen moment

Singing…




Deca, this is perfect!

Love, Margherita

Nightshade
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just out of reach
9 posted 2004-08-31 04:38 PM


Mmmmmm....ah,....Mmmmmm
Dark Angel
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Posts 10095

10 posted 2004-08-31 04:48 PM


And I smile in your smile,
Wearing your eyes
Knowing that

You hear me,


YES! This is perfect.

Maree

The clouds never expect it when it rains, but the sea, changes colour, but the sea, does not change.
~Stevie Nicks~

skyshine
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Beneath the northern stars
11 posted 2004-08-31 04:48 PM


I think that would keep me too....this was quietly beautiful.

~sky

So you go and make it happen
Do your best, just keep on laughing
It's all on you, there's always a brand new day. -Avril Lavigne

Magnus
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12 posted 2004-08-31 05:31 PM


Nope, I am not going to pull out those same
lines and say how good they are.  I won't do
it,  you can't make me!!!

Awrightee,  I'll do it....sheesh....
And I smile in your smile,
Wearing your eyes
Knowing that

You hear me,

in a stolen moment

Singing…

suthern
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Louisiana
13 posted 2004-09-01 02:12 PM


I'm not even going to ask how I missed this... for I've missed so much lately. *S* But I'm grateful it came up again... I think I must library it so it doesn't slip away from me again. *S*
Gentle Spirit
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since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989

14 posted 2004-09-01 02:34 PM


ok. ok...I missed it too, but darn, am I GLAD it came back up...
tis lovely Deca!  Just lovely!

kayjay
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Posts 2015
Oregon
15 posted 2004-09-02 10:02 AM


The flame of romance burns brightly within your heart.  KJ

Through rubble and trouble and dark of night
The yawn of a dawn will hasten the light

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