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exhale Senior Member
since 2003-06-13
Posts 646Alberta,Canada 
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you want words you want to hear me scream telling you of my darkest dreams my darkest thoughts you want words you need words my words,these words..these words that are wrapped around my heart pulsing through my veins you need words you want words breathe through me breathe me in take these words to your heart take my words to heart you want words you need words you'll let it soak into you my words flwoing through your veins is this really what you call safe is this what you call love you need words |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Yes, words and action...James |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Yes, sometimes one needs to hear words. In this I hear frustration and anger, is this correct? As if your words were daggers being thrown. Very emotional write. Susan Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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Ethan Halo Senior Member
since 2000-04-28
Posts 793on the roof again |
words are never enough... but sometimes they can fill the spaces between... i undertsand the frustration in this one, but there's more than that in this poem. you give me much to think about, and i like it when a poem does that. superb. it's not that the future is near or far... |
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