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mysticpoe
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since 2003-02-28

Posts 883

0 posted 2004-10-06 08:17 PM

final feel

Place me on this dream at last,
from lands of gray
and islands masked.
Cast-a-way to final feel
and wake me not,
if from so real.
Where turning back, to never toss,
one more dream
and one more cross.
This final feel
to hold me now
and mist the ghost
from channels lost.

Real, from the real - are you really real?

If nothing is something
then everything is
our thoughts and feelings
and all that exists.

inkedgoddess
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since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

1 posted 2004-10-06 08:42 PM

Real, from the real - are you really real?

sometimes only for the moment...make it last

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

2 posted 2004-10-06 09:15 PM

LOL, this made me want to chant and dance in the fog...for REAL

wranx
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since 2002-06-07

Posts 3689
Moved from a shack to a barn

3 posted 2004-10-07 11:28 PM

Wayne, This has a definite "Poe-like" quality.... Your handle tells me that it's no accident.

Ed

mysticpoe
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since 2003-02-28

Posts 883

4 posted 2004-10-08 09:06 AM

Inkedgoddess, yes, for a moment and I'm still trying to figure out how long a moment does take? Thanks for stopping by again, appreciate!!

Midnitsun, to chant and dance in the fog-- I like that, though never did try it, I think?. Sounds like fun. Enjoying your responses!!Thanks again.

wranx, thanks for the stop-by's, always did like poe-a-lot. Much appreciated!!

Again, thank you all.

wayne

If nothing is something
then everything is
our thoughts and feelings
and all that exists.

eor
Senior Member

since 2002-09-26

Posts 959
blues & greys

5 posted 2004-10-08 06:05 PM

ver nice write poe, ver nice...

i always enjoy your stuff, always a lot of thought and effort put into all your writing.

Awake through motion with curiosity to curtain your first move
Over arms length they'll break protocol
Jealous envy for the youngest one

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

6 posted 2004-10-09 03:54 AM

good write...enjoyed the read

mysticpoe
Senior Member

since 2003-02-28

Posts 883

7 posted 2004-10-09 09:26 AM

eor, my friend. Thank you ver much for the ver nice comments. I always look forward to your visits. Thanks again.

passing shadows, Thank you, good to have you stop by again. Thanks.

Thanks again to both of you fine poets.

wayne`

If nothing is something
then everything is
our thoughts and feelings
and all that exists.

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
Member Ascendant

since 2000-01-29

Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia

8 posted 2004-10-10 06:36 AM

ah nice write! dreams and reality ...

littlewing
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since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

9 posted 2004-10-11 07:04 PM

this read as a chant . . .
beautiful writing, Wayne.

miscellanea
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since 2004-06-24

Posts 4060
OH

10 posted 2004-10-17 10:40 AM

This read beautifully aloud! I ask myself teh very question at times. Exquisite!
cathy/miscellanea

mysticpoe
Senior Member

since 2003-02-28

Posts 883

11 posted 2004-10-17 03:56 PM

Thank you very much again Cathy, Thank you.

wayne

If nothing is something
then everything is
our thoughts and feelings
and all that exists.

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