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In Sync ( or so once thought) rp
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In Sync ( or so once thought) rp |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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In Sync Not my intentions to be entombed in the thought patterns that ramble in uncertainties. Somewhere, I know, there is pleasure waiting to be revealed to me, to paint me in the night, make me a sampler of your tastes, bordering me in the "somethings about you" to silken my edges, hold me together, arm me in a season of love. I take it as it comes, dance the dance of life alone, for now, side stepping old patterns, trying not to play the fool or sweat the small stuff while I await to carve out my niche in life, tenderly thinking of the past, no longer holding onto, except for the years given to me in memories, that make me who I am today. I am a reflection of myself, radiant at most, pondering with thoroughness the care needed to unburden my soul. It is with my words, that I attempt to reach the tranquility, hushing the stirrings that rise when panic sets in, paralyzing my efforts. Somewhere, is the you, capsuled, awaiting my touch to unlock time, freeing all, yours, mine, to no longer need restraints. And only then will time's signature play out the meter, beating each measure of my heart to dance a rhythm in sync. M '02 "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." |
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babygirlwlove Senior Member
since 2004-10-10
Posts 1180New York City |
oh niiice....this is beautiful! **babygirL** |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
thank you bbg...just in case you didn't know (and it is no secret...) I am also Alicethruglass...when I am in my contemplating moods...so I thank you for your visits and replies there, also. Maureen (~A~) |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
I am pleased that you brought this poem back into the light of day. It is a remarkably open and honest. You not only show your heart, you give it to your readers. May the love that you so richly deserve soon come your way. You are a very beautiful soul ~ and a darn fine poet to boot!  EA |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Wonderful write M. Mega hugs~ ~Autumn..the year's last, loveliest smile.~ |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Ah sweet M, I like the progress you have made and the woman you have become. Lovely indeed... If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan |
Wake up, Day calls you Wake up, Day calls you to your life: your duty. And to live, nothing more. Root it out of the glum night and the darkness that covered your body for which light waited on tiptoe in the dawn. Stand up, affirm the straight simple will to be a pure slender virgin. Test your body’s metal. Cold, heat? Your blood will tell against the snow, or behind the window. The colour in your cheeks will tell. And look at people. Rest doing no more than adding your perfection to another day. Your task is to carry your life high, and play with it, hurl it like a voice to the clouds so it may retrieve the light already gone from us. That is your fate: to live. Do nothing. Your work is you, nothing more. Pedro Salinas |
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mysticpoe Senior Member
since 2003-02-28
Posts 883 |
I take it as it comes, dance the dance of life alone, for now, side stepping old patterns, side stepping old patterns. Wisdom at it's best. Nice write here. wayne If nothing is something |
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