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nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200
Between the Lines

0 posted 2004-10-15 07:35 PM



In Sync

Not my intentions
to be entombed
in the thought patterns
that ramble in uncertainties.
Somewhere, I know,
there is pleasure waiting  
to be revealed to me,
to paint me in the night,
make me a sampler of your tastes,
bordering me in the
"somethings about you"
to silken my edges, hold me together,
arm me in a season of love.

I take it as it comes,
dance the dance of life alone, for now,
side stepping old patterns,
trying not to play the fool
or sweat the small stuff while
I await to carve out my niche in life,
tenderly thinking of the past,
no longer holding onto,
except for the years given to me
in memories,
that make me who I am today.

I am a reflection of myself,
radiant at most,
pondering with thoroughness
the care needed to unburden my soul.
It is with my words, that I attempt to reach
the tranquility, hushing the stirrings
that rise when panic sets in,
paralyzing my efforts.

Somewhere, is the you, capsuled,
awaiting my touch to unlock time,
freeing all, yours, mine,
to no longer need restraints.
And only then will time's signature
play out the meter,
beating each measure of my heart
to dance a rhythm in sync.

M

'02

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

© Copyright 2004 Wynter Bliss - All Rights Reserved
babygirlwlove
Senior Member
since 2004-10-10
Posts 1180
New York City
1 posted 2004-10-15 07:40 PM


oh niiice....this is beautiful!


**babygirL**

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200
Between the Lines
2 posted 2004-10-15 07:44 PM


thank you bbg...just in case you didn't know (and it is no secret...) I am also Alicethruglass...when I am in  my  contemplating moods...so I thank you for your visits and replies there, also.

Maureen (~A~)

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215
Realms of Light
3 posted 2004-10-15 07:45 PM


I am pleased that you brought this poem back into the light of day. It is a remarkably open and honest. You not only show your heart, you give it to your readers.

May the love that you so richly deserve soon come your way. You are a very beautiful soul ~ and a darn fine poet to boot!


EA

Enchantress
Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113
Canada eh.
4 posted 2004-10-15 07:49 PM


Wonderful write M.
Mega hugs~

~Autumn..the year's last, loveliest smile.~

Larry C
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Member Patricius
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286
United States
5 posted 2004-10-15 07:52 PM


Ah sweet M,
I like the progress you have made and the woman you have become. Lovely indeed...

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

Huan Yi
Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688
Waukegan
6 posted 2004-10-15 08:17 PM


Wake up, Day calls you


Wake up, Day calls you
to your life: your duty.
And to live, nothing more.
Root it out of the glum
night and the darkness
that covered your body
for which light waited
on tiptoe in the dawn.
Stand up, affirm the straight
simple will to be
a pure slender virgin.
Test your body’s metal.
Cold, heat?  Your blood
will tell against the snow,
or behind the window.
The colour
in your cheeks will tell.
And look at people.  Rest
doing no more than adding
your perfection to another
day.  Your task
is to carry your life high,
and play with it, hurl it
like a voice to the clouds
so it may retrieve the light
already gone from us.
That is your fate: to live.
Do nothing.
Your work is you, nothing more.


Pedro Salinas

mysticpoe
Senior Member
since 2003-02-28
Posts 883

7 posted 2004-10-17 04:20 PM


I take it as it comes,
dance the dance of life alone, for now,
side stepping old patterns,

side stepping old patterns. Wisdom at it's best. Nice write here.

wayne

If nothing is something
then everything is
our thoughts and feelings
and all that exists.

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