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Gluttony |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296
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Should that I never ask evermore In gluttony I empathize now Speculate at your artistry Cursing the moments of which I could have swam, on course A course Which wasn’t yours? How could I have been so self-imposed? The time & place were right The intellectual diversity was there In compatibility to my curious side But by the God’s, we were not mature Intellectuals Enough to nod to needs, mutual personal Essentials which seam Although if we allowed, our rationale Was beneficial, significant to that place In time…eyes with insidious intent Cannot be inline with the Gods Nor reap an invention of circle Looking towards the same sky Summer can be a defeating heat Or a look into the heart of spirit I found your visit an embraced blessing Essential to escalation Considering myself always, a guest in your home Forgive me, for the adolescence in me? I ponder, was I as vital As you were to my corridor For I learned visage placed The ending was a ripening flame That pulls the distance into name Painting our dreams into full moon Adversary became a stillborn culture Yet to be learned in “small shakes” Fragmented coincidence? I think not As nothing is coincidence Should that I never ask evermore… In gluttony We are both yet, meant to be discovered By the veil that uncovered that moment |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
LeeJ We are what we are and you are special.  |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Oh God, so very true Lee . . . This helped you, you know? I have been struggling with letting go of the fact that when I was married, neither one of us saw each other for what we were to become, if that makes any sense. Thank you. |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Littlewing, it more then makes sense, and is exactly what the poem is speaking smiles and hugs...thank you Sy...aw heck...blushing, give credit where credits due....no more special then the existence of anyone else...we're all part of the circle...luv ya hun |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
It is hard when you find yourself on a path that is splitting from the path you share with another. Somewhere there has to be an invisible path that we just need to seek a little harder to find that would take both to both destinations without that split. Culture, maturity, passion, ??????? There is much work in any relationship, I think you hit on one of the ones that require the most attention. Great read and loved the read. |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
ohhhh Mark, good morning and thank you for reading...you are so so right...what we don't seem to understand about love is the fact that it is constant change, it needs to be to flourish...and is a work in progress....not a reason to satisfy lust...and justify its demise with blame? It is a culture all in it's own, that needs the stimulus of many things, including change, growth, fulfillment, emotional gratification...allowance...birth, the child within...a responsibility, compatibility is essential Thank you |
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