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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Moving Sculpture The street was littered with leaves While the sun withered the sculpture Woven by a frivolous breeze The hands of a master sculptor A dog sniffed secrets from the air The birds hunt food upon the ground And I eyed movement through my stare The sum of which was quite profound Timed ticked a rhythm bray Shadows danced a puppets show And light spot each moments play Upon a moving rivers flow I knew that change was playing court And time was busy sifting sand By changing of the guard of wrought The very nature of the brand I wonder at the littered leaves Woven by a frivolous breeze? |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
See More "Timed ticked a rhythm bray Shadows danced a puppets show And light spot each moments play Upon a moving rivers flow" Beautiful poetry....  Love it!-------ice/ford ><> Come read to me some poem, |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Sighhh, absolutely beautiful poetry indeed. i'm keeping it. Maree cuz fate is not just whose cooking smells good |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Good Morning Sy! I love the image of leaves as a moving sculpture .... you know they gather and hug each other while "coping with transition". Beautiful images! Love, Margherita  |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
you are a gem, and I betcha there's a lot of us out here who have wondered the same.... Thank you for giving me hope this morning...for your wise heart and gentle care It's a great life, and a great world...and we have to always remember, this to shall pass and flourish. Love ya hun...takecarea you and yours Me |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
ice Thank you for the beautiful comment my friend. Maree, LOL A privilege to be kept by you. Margherita Thank you for the lovely reply. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
LeeJ You are simply precious, good morning sweet.  |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
And I eyed movement through my stare The sum of which was quite profound Timed ticked a rhythm bray Shadows danced a puppets show And light spot each moments play Upon a moving rivers flow I knew that change was playing court And time was busy sifting sand By changing of the guard of wrought The very nature of the brand ==================================== Well, ya got the profound part right Sy-babes....and this one is as lovely and profound as the seasons change...I love the spark of curiosity and the awe of all that is around you in this gem. Randy and I have chilly willy toes this morn...LOL--we dropped into the 30s and had light frost for the first time..a tad early for us. Gonna try and play some catch up in here today...so much poetry...so little moth  *winkiewinkie*  I would love to live as a river flows, carried by the surprise of its own unfolding. |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
I believe that time weaves nothing frivolously. A plan exists and is followed to the letter every second. Well done Sy. believe in what your heart feels... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
I agree with Scorpio here Sy. Much enjoyed the morning read. ~Morning hugs & tea, Nancy~ ~Autumn..the year's last, loveliest smile.~ |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Good morning, my friend! One of the most useful attributes of a good poet, is an observant eye. You not only see the world around you, you watch and look and turn it into memorable poetry. I also enjoy the fruits of your inquiring and philosophizing mind! Like you, I am not just a star-gazer, I am a leaf and cloud gazer! Look on! Writie on! Loves 'n hugs, EA |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
JM, Beautiful picture with a great quote. Glad you have time to play catch up. Got your package off today, you should get it about friday.Keep warm |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sy I loved this one...reminded me of some photos a certain moth takes.  |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Timed ticked a rhythm bray Shadows danced a puppets show And light spot each moments play Upon a moving rivers flow This is absolutely lovely, my friend... *S* |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
suthern Thanks for the bump and lovely. Martie |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
good to read you, even though late in the night |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Exquisite! Other than that, I am speechless Love Liz |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
scorpio You are right it was just my impression Nancy, You are a doll, Hugs. Earth Angel, All I can say is I'll try. Martie, Love you. suthern, Thanks for the lovely, lovely passing, You are a sweetheart. Elizabeth, Miss you, Love Sy |
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