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Day 117 over easy
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Day 117 over easy |
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Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597
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Day 117 Cafe breakfast. Eggs over-easy and cut the corny overhead music, ok? I need to wake up gently. On-the-road sucks ya know and you're not making it any easier. Crap, I should have skipped this and stopped for lunch instead! |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I need to wake up gently. ~*~ No one should be jolted awake... Enjoyed this, Kraw...a slice of life... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Krawdad, Skipped breakfast many a day, enjoyed the write. |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
i only scramble i always break the yokes giggle |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"I need to wake up gently." Nodding here in understanding. Morning hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
I can just see you sitting there pondering. I agree, cut the music....maybe the beef is on the menu? |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Magnus heard my words before I wrote them -- so I'll just say.....enjoyed! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
understanding this all too well |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
why DO they turn that music on so loud in the morning? should be nothin' louder than the bacon sizzlin'... happy trails ~K~ |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Oh, I do love a good laugh, and this was great. It easily conveys its intended sentiments.  SusanHappiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
This poem stuck in my head so I came back. Krawdad, is this a political statement; it seems like maybe this is a countdown to the election date. ???? |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Well done!! believe in what your heart feels... |
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Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597 |
Thanks all for stopping by . . . Sey - never skip it, just grumble thru it  _lady - "I always break the yolks" - must be that Deputy attitude! heehee iliana - no politics intended, just a grumpy ol' fart grumbling at breakfast.  |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice writing...reminds me of when me and my friend were motorcycling California...we would stop once a day at Perrys Smorgasbord and eat enough to last until the next day...James |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
I am a terrible person in the morning... Someone should just shoot an arm in the door holding coffee...then back away slowly..  understood.."cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind" |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
amen |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
sometimes, it seems best to skip all the meals of the day enjoyed this, day 117 |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
"leave the pot, I'll need more than this cup of black to get my eyes open and the rest of me ready to accept the day" nice slice Kraw... enjoyed the form and the delivery.. |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
good for a giggle this mornin'! lol hugs, g "Everybody just wants to get high...sit and watch a perfect world go by..." (T.McGraw) |
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