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Sacrifice |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state 
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If it were me I would wait consult, wait... deliberate disturbances from dosed sleep lethal in small quantities just to warn of an already sealed fate as soldiers negate death's checkmate... for me, I'd keep applying a phlebo to observe lifelines undisturbed listen for an encouraging word.. heaven help me if I have to pull a plug to have to see a heart rate slow slowed to almost unbearable murmur then it would be too late to revive medidate to reanimate repeal the course of fate cause I'd slackened the wire disconnected a current choice kept the patient safe for another day unhurt patients have the time to question and I'd question the state of my patience. [This message has been edited by ecrivan (10-06-2004 07:15 PM).] |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
wow dont know how to respond to this one. good write |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
the last line was in tatters had to rewrite that and a decent ending... |
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